Make new chapters please.

I'm so sad there isn't more of this. I truly love this kind of dark stories. Very dark stories! Thanks for sharing anyway. Amazing writing!

I want the next chapter. Please...

Too bad this adds to your review count but I have to advise you this:

- You are a twisted and mentally unstable person.

- The themes perpetuated in this story are inhumane.

- Rape is WRONG no matter the shape or form.

- Keep the other kinky stuff if you like, but using rape as a pleasurable plot device should not be allowed.

- By posting this on the internet where any sick psycho can read it, you may potentially inspire a twisted individual to carry out acts from this story in real life.

- This is not a flame but rather a warning that your story is inappropriate for this site.

- Due to the MA rating, you should move over to the Adult FanFiction site instead.

- If you continue to find pleasure in rape, extreme masochism, and mutilation, please go see a doctor as you may need your head checked.

- Again this is not a flame, but rather a kind reminder that you are mentally unstable.

Please edit or take this down :)

Wow this's very dark, when I think sasori have nice side, you destroy my thought.. I can't guess this story..
I love this story, I hope this story didn't hiatus or discontinue ..
Keep writing senpai..!

I admit it i love these stories but i have to try my hardest from asking somone to rape me . but i don't think itd be going overboard making stories like this more whats the word o well you get my point . review from the perv emilia

You stopped writing. You lost interest.

I love this story and I hope you continue it.

The most breathtakeing fanfic that I ever read!Plz update soon!

Please Update!I seriously like this fanfic!

Still no chapter 11 and 12 yet?

I really honestly like this can you update soon?

Update!

Good story scary some what but good

Well this was weird
(Not the kinkiness, just the change of her Attitude)