I love it! So cute!

Not bad, Not bad at all. good job!

I enjoyed this a lot. Cute story, nice one-off.

I would skim over it sometime and fix a few errors (an improper time-tense here, a missing word there) because any good story is worth improving. It's not riddled with them (I wouldn't bother reading it if it was) but there are a handful.

I'm actually going to go ahead and subscribe to you because you show a ton of potential in this fic.

Awwwwwww! That was good!

that was cute

Great Fic. I enjoyed it.:)

Like I said on DeviantArt, its truly a fantastic story! Loved every word of it :)

I suggest you refrain from saying you "suck" at writing summaries, to those who don't know of how truly an amazing writer you are, they'll see it as your way of saying you're a bad writer... since NORMALLY those who can write well, can also summarize well... but that's not always true, such as in your case apparently.

A summary is basically just a witty way of describing the plot of the story without giving too much away - but saying enough to entice a reader to check it out... I'm sure you can do a lot better :)

Keep up the excellent work!