Please update

When someone says that something with the words Star Wars the clone war is good I star during if laughter because we all know they suck (except this book)

What the fuck it went from Naruto to minato mid stride take this pece of shit and go die in a hole with it

Please change the title

honest thoughts at this point are that it's not bad, but Bariss may as well not be used at all, considering her relevance. another thing is that Naruto has suffered no major setbacks. maybe it was coming but, just hasn't happened yet I still feel as if he needs to be destroyed by someone.

another thing is that while it's actually reasonable to assume the CIS have a genuine cause (the republic is corrupt to an extent, blame palpatine) the CIS are just as bad really. only they decided to start a war over it.

finally it's a trope and overdone where he just decides that he is completely justified in everything he does. he's acts like Suzaku (code geass) with an agenda of Lelouch (a rebellion but the guy just wants to blame everyone but, himself and refuses to take responsibility for his actions.)

You fool you just had to fucking add other naruto characters

I feel like if this ever continued it would build up to Barriss's loss of faith with the republic and Naruto's eventual downfall in to darkness and regret

the deflected jedi?

example: the jedi raised his lightsaber and DEFLECTED the shot right back at the droid.

synonym: ricochet, avert or pivot

That was awesome, while yes it probably COULD have been better, you have no reason to doubt yourself that was great all the way through.

Is it minato or naruto? They aren't the same thing. Two left the temple, then "minato" minato comes in and you remove naruto, then you add and replace naruto with minato back and forth back and up your mind. Is he Minato or Naruto. He can't be both

Please update this its absolutely amazing and I'm dying to read more.

Will Naruto be going with Barriss or hinii (spelling?)

Would be of a sequel story; get to it, seriously. Anyways awesome story hope you continue writing things like this, next time I'm really interested in seeing a note ptosis Lord turn Jedi or maybe jet I turn sick Lord, not too certain about it; Anyways hope you continue writing/typing here on fanfiction

Can't help it I'm sure you been told before but it is defected no I wouldn't care usually but it is in your title I couldn't ignore it

please update i love this story