Poor story at least write a summary based on where this story takes place and why things are so different than the original world of naruto doesn’t even sound like this is a Shinobi world plus the story is disturbing that involves incest and other things that shouldn’t be mentioned delete this.

Type your review useless just delete it already phedopile writer

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Why is it all out of order?

You sir must know how disgusted I was when I read that piece of monstrosity (Hinata's ceremony thingy). Though I hate it, it gives naruto a reason to kill that slimy bastard. Please never write something like that again, but for the story and writing skills you, sir, are a genius.

So I assume Chin-Xi is basically China? The history seems similar and the Zodiacs are Chinese. And I'm guessing that Tenten is the missing princess of Chin-Xi based on the fact that her clothing has a Chinese style and it was mentioned she had a dark past.

Also, I just realised, since Hinata is a Demon Slayer who hunts down Makians and Jinchuuriki, will a conflict between Hinata and Naruto happen later on in the story?

The slap, really if it. Were me the next thing ten ten would of got would be a fight

You have pu zabuza instead of tabun a twice

Error in this chapter: Both Ukataka and Roushi are listed as the 6 tails... Pretty sure Roushi was the 4 tails _

The 5 tail is a whale horse i think

Where is Gai amd Lee in the 'notable Jonin and Genin' section of the AN? The Flames of Yooooouuuuthhhhhh...you know.

I am starting to dislike your version of Ninja... especially the Kunoichi part sure it may have happened in the past but it was not a requirement for them it was a OPTION other ways a Kunoichi operated other than seducing their targets was poisoning, stealing, information gathering, or flat out killing them while their targets slept, were left unguarded for even a second.

That's was a pretty lame way to kill off zabuza and haku. A gun? Really?

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Not going to lie, I normally HATE cross overs, yet the way you are writing this not only has me not wanting to stop, but on the edge of my seat wondering what the hell you are throwing out next! Keep up the great work! And if you ever need a beta let me know, I'd love to read more stories like this!