Please continue! This is the best plot line by far!

WHEN YA UPDATUNG?

i like the dai x dark pairing best but i also like krad x dai too -

Excellent start. Very intriguing. I'd be very grateful if you would continue this. It holds such potential!

Sounds like a good story! Good job on Satoshi's POV, well written. :)

I don't know how long ago you wrote this & why the heck you didn't continue it because the storyline is awesome! The characters have so much dynamic and they aren't really too far of a stretch from their original characters. if you're thinking of ever continuing this, know you have a fan :)

so, to sum it up: you're awesome, keep it up! :D

What do you mean no action? There seemed to be alot of emotional action going on. It really does make me curious too. What could have happened to Dark? Where is Krad now? Is Satoshi going to kill Dark because Daisuke so OBVIOUSLY loves him?*wink wink*

There were some grammar mistakes too acutally. Wait lemme correct that. One grammar mistake. But were all human ne? So I cant wait for the next update! Please do update?

Okay...I don't watch D.N. Angel so I'm like...totally lost about is who and what people look like but I've read it because I said I would and Houseki Nazuha never goes back on her word! Maybe one day I'll look into the series. Lol. Looking forward to reading more lol. -

Not much of a revie but continue please!

I will REALLY like to see what happens :3

A love triangle drama? Yes please!~

I think you're wrong about not much action happening in this chapter; sure I don't know what you would classify as iaction/i but quite some important things happened and I think it was a good prologue, you explained their situation very clearly. At least it got ime/i interested! ;D

I found your writing style very comfortable while I was reading, it felt simple and clean yet you fit in all the necessary descriptions nicely. I liked that :3 for once I didn't have to sit and translate words on the side every five sentences! xD

Ah, I'm babbling again! Anyway! I think you have a good story in your hands and would love to see some more of it soon!