Holy shit that was amazingly tripy, its just like what makes up Agel Beats and haruhi perfectly combined with a sad ending where everyone has moved on, and the world effectivly ends/resets, but it also makes a comeback which is what angel beats is known for, and the completely tripy moments of haruhi and its characters trying to understand the world around was absolutely beautiful, you are a wonderful person author-san please keep creating great stories like this.

I love it already! I can't wait read more!

So addicting...
Having never read Angel Beats I had no idea what to expect from Yuri but my conclusions are that she is a perfect fit for Haruhi.
The pacing is excellent in this story even when it picks up after chapter 13.
The character development is what keeps the readers to their pages and the plot has many twists that completely surprise me.
However, the plot really goes wonky after chapter 13 whereupon I can't make heads or tails of what is going on. I think Yuki needs another chapter to herself after the end because I take it she is the antagonist. Did she disappear or still exist?
One way to make the chapters easier to follow is to introduce who the protagonist is before their part. Especially on the parts where the story is written in first person.
I will be expecting great stories from the author in the future. Count me as a new reader. ..

Was that a Clannad reference at the end?

Put simply best fan fiction I have ever read

This is definatly one of my favorite fanfictions out there! I was always thought about what was going to come next! I never wanted to stop reading it. ;) Really, it was amazing! :D

That was a good one. Not the best I've read, but still...

You write very nicely.
For a change, it was really nice.

well,ya almost lost me there.

who's da unknown?! Who?
I had a hunch that it's Kanade? Err...

Oh. I was wrong. Actually better than expected. Still, what' s the actual purpose?

what, she saw them somewhere in the film?

That. Was. Epic!

"What God would be so selfish as to deny me that right...?" *CoughCoughHaruhiCoughCough*

Now one sentence in there was like a Puella Magi Madoka Magica reference. Still, very nice.

...I think I missed the Negima reference...I can't find it.