This is a good story. I like it.

Your descriptions in your writing are absolutely gorgeous.

That was something.

Something good.

I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I just found your work and I have to tell you ... you have ruined me for all other Supernatural writers. Wrecked. Destroyed. But that's OK because I enjoyed being ruined. Thank you for your beautiful stories.

Love the outsider POV here! Baby Winchesters will always break my heart

This story warmed my heart. Little Sam and Dean brought out the best in a tired woman and made her world a brighter place. I saved it to my favorites.

You made me cry dammit!

Nice outsider POV. Like how Nancy figured out they must have walked from the motel. And of course it leaves the reader free to imagine all kinds of reasons for this scenario!

very sweet, I'm glad Dean got pie :)

I loved your story! Its so adorable! Sam and Dean are so cute :)

Awwwwww, this was awesome, loved it :)

That is simply the sweetest thing ever ! I've had the dumbest smile on my face all along ! I loved it ! Pure sweetness !

If you're still writing, a suggestion would be if the boys went back to the diner and Nancy regognized them by their eyes/smiles. She could see that even though they were worse for wear, they ended up just fine.

BABY SAM AND DEAN. SO CUTE. n.n

Excellent one shot and I love the outsider POV. It is always interesting to think how others would reacted to a young Sam and Dean. Great job!