Reviews for Daimyo of Water |
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my 2 guys chapter 4 . 1/23/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 4 . 6/23/2014 Hope the rewrite is up soon. |
blood-elf101 chapter 4 . 3/30/2013 Hey great story glad ur continuing it xD hope to see a new chapter soon keep p the great work wish u the best of luck on and also do u low of any other naruto is a daimyo fics? |
zzdragon chapter 4 . 2/21/2013 Hey I am writing a new version of your's Daimyo of Water story is that okay ? |
NarutosBrat chapter 2 . 2/1/2013 I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but you're wasting valuable potential with this story by making it a drama. The unmitigated humor that you could produce with a slightly dim Naruto (who still somehow causes his village to thrive by asking himself what the old man would do; though occasionally being wrong since he'd only seen the kind side of the Hokage before) learning as he goes is wasted on being serious. Not only that, but the reactions of everyone who doubted him when they find out how good a job he's doing could provide several chapters worth of fun in itself. |
NarutosBrat chapter 1 . 2/1/2013 The group is called Akatsuki, Akatsuchi is an Iwa shinobi. |
ren chapter 4 . 8/27/2012 why not tsunami ? |
pensuka chapter 4 . 2/7/2012 darn still i was surprised a fanfiction where naruto becomes daimyo what were the odd of that |
blakopslover chapter 3 . 12/2/2011 YOU FUCKING SUCK! you skip words and have bad choice of words! like i said YOU FUCKING SUCK! |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/3/2011 I think you need to review the basics of english. You syntax, grammar and spelling are atrocious. |
Flameus chapter 4 . 1/8/2011 update Check out the poll on my profile page |
Gold Testament chapter 4 . 10/3/2010 not bad there were a few mistakes and there were two parts i couldnt understand but its good naruto being a daimyo very clever |
vanguardian1 chapter 4 . 9/25/2010 Very interesting idea. Writing's not horrible, a little clearer and more detailed would fix most of your issues I believe. Don't see a need for Tayuya, but Sasame (get the Fuma clan!), Koyuki (Snow), Haruna (Vetegable), Taki (Bird), and Shion (Demon) are all better options. |
curious 37465 chapter 4 . 9/10/2010 hey man great story idea so far. i really hope you put shion and anko in the harem, don't know if the poll thing took my votes or not. any way i just wanted to ask something, please tell me you are not going to do some weird female sasuke thing because i've recently seen that in a few stories. just please don't do that, or do your call really, just think it would be over the top a little. |
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 9/3/2010 great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. I'd personally love to see Temari and Kurotsuchi (Tsuchikage's bodyguard) with Naruto, mainly the latter. |