This was incredible! I didn't even think of that until the very end and when I read it through a second time it was all so different. It was very good!

i had no clue until the very end
it broke my heart but it was a great heartbreak :)

I know this story is two years old but I only recently started reading this fandom. At first I didn't understand what was going on exactly, but after reading it all the way through I do. It's very well done and it's go so much emotion in it that you don't notice at first but sticks with you later. I love it.

Oh wow, I totally didn't see that coming. Really good.

Wow. That was really good! I love how you wrote it so that no one really knew she was dead! Great job!

Oh my god. This is excellent- I've never read a story like this on here... Very sixth sense-y (which I Iove.) I didn't figure it out at all, I was like hooooly, then went back and reread it. Awesome :)

the twist ending did add a lot of depth to the story

I love it.

love this story! such a great storyline, I didn't see that coming