If you could somehow bring the carring part in the story that would be great i mean like athur gets stuck dreaming and cant wake up or he gets hurt or something so that ariadne gets worried , sorry i just love him
Besides i'm german ️deutschland ich komm aus stuttgart des is in baden-würtemberg

i like how their relationship is growing kind off slowly and awkwardly, its much better than the "poof they're in love right after kissing for two seconds" stories

this has been a very good story, are you planning to continue it?

i really liked the ending! it was so sweet!

Ariadne's subconscious is frighting!

I love this. :) Your Arthur and Araidne (especially your Ariande,) are written really well - and you haven't got carried away with the fandom tendeancy to pairing these two together and have them snogging all over the place. :L

Nice work, definately adding to alerts and favourites.

-Lucy

I enjoyed reading this chapter. Ariadne's projections turning on her and shoving her away from Arthur then hitting on him etc. She can't blame Arthur for her own frisky subconcious, but I guess there's just no excuse for him kissing another woman? That gave me a good laugh. Well done.

Pretty good for witer's block. I know how you feel.

I CANT WAIT FOR MORE AND MORE AND MORE! one of the best i have read on arthur ariadne :D

I liked it

just read it and absolutely loved it

sweet and light and great!

loved the open-viewing dreams plot twist.

zomg.

He saw her dream, along with everybody else?

Jesus.

xD

LMAOOOO.

"Is that your subconscious wants to do to me?"

xD

Really quick. I thought you did a good job with this chapter.

But you could have add more detail.

I would have really liked if you had added in the 'urgent meeting'.

- Love your story, can't wait until the next chapter!

p.s I hope I didn't offend you at all with my critique... Your writing is wonderful!