Reviews for Excalibur: The Sword is Drawn |
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Kimmy chapter 10 . 3/6/2018 Thank you for this. Love it |
bradsan92 chapter 9 . 8/6/2016 Where did Spike go? He was back Alive in chapter 7 and now he is dead again. Why won't some champs not show their identity and keep wearing there mask. It doesn't make sense, stupid even. Enjoyed reading this one. Thans for sharing |
Red Death chapter 6 . 7/3/2014 You really really really need a proofreader. It's an amusing story, but with all the easily correctable spelling, punctuation, capitalization, formatting and grammar errors its very hard to understand. Especially when it comes to your dialogue. Sometimes you're completely missing the quotation marks, which makes it virtually impossible to tell what supposed to be dialogue and what's not. And in some cases you're completely misspelling proper nouns that you should really find impossible to misspell. "Anmanguses" for example. Not a real word. Not even in Harry Potter land. The story has promise but it needs a proofreader before can be anything more than a C-grade product. |
edboy4926 chapter 9 . 7/18/2013 Good story |
Harry2 chapter 9 . 12/23/2010 THis was a nice way to end the tale. I wonder if you have any MORE plans for Excalibur? |
Zippy Saboteur chapter 2 . 12/21/2010 You should really go through and edit this story. At least in this chapter there are a ton of missing quotation marks. I couldn't finish reading it as the constant dialog with no quotation marks was driving me crazy. I really don't understand how quotation marks can be something missed during even a quick revision, but there are a lot missing and it ruins an otherwise interesting story. |
Bobboky chapter 8 . 11/28/2010 pretty good |
Harry2 chapter 8 . 11/27/2010 Well, it sounds like the team is ready for battlle. Now, its time to take care of Illyria once and for all! |
Harry2 chapter 7 . 10/5/2010 Sounds like the X-Man has been chosen by the Ancient Gods to become the Weapons Master for the heros. And Fred is is his assitant. LET THE GAMES BEGIN! |
Bobboky chapter 7 . 9/30/2010 cool |
zeo knight chapter 6 . 8/8/2010 this is a good one the character of fire was fascinating to me |
Harry2 chapter 6 . 8/8/2010 Nice job giving Monie her own heroic powers. Now, lets see what you have planned for our OTHER magic user! |
Cylon One chapter 5 . 8/5/2010 And now it's Katie becoming the Valkyrie. This is just too awesome. Great update. |
Iceflame55 chapter 5 . 8/2/2010 Interesting! Will be watching :) |
Scott the Wanderer chapter 1 . 8/1/2010 This is great so far. though personally it'd be too much fun to add Xander to even the Buffy/Harry Potter forces. Having him injured is a great excuse to have agree to being a Champion or Avatar. Given his history there are so many that would fit. Janus, Ishtar, Quetzacoatl, the Spirit of Freedom (part of what makes Captain America), Haesphateus (especially with the limp), or even just Africa (via the Hyena primal) |