I really like this story. It's very sweet, cute, and well written. Though, I just want to point out that Tenzin is the youngest of The Cloud Babies.

Aww..! XD SO CUTE! X3

OMG... That was the sweetes thing I've ever read **tearbend**

That was so beautiful... Congratulation :P

u should totally write a sequal.

u are awsome like that 3

plz! for all the people who have better things to do than work on a golden tan! (like me 3 im actually really pale)

"Goodnight my angel, time to close your eyes,

And save these questions for another day,

I think I know what you've been asking me;

I think you know what I've been trying to say.

I promised I would never leave you

And you should always know

Wherever you may go, no matter where you are

I never will be far away.

Goodnight my angel now it's time to dream

And dream how wonderful your life will be.

Someday your child may cry, and if you sing this lullaby

Then in your heart there will always be a part of me."

Lullaby (Goodnight My Angel)- River of Dreams- Billy Joel

The Teoph chapter made me cry. I'm a huge Teoph shipper, so I was so sad to hear Toph sing that. You did an excellent job keeping everyone in-character, btw.

Um, I do have a request, tho. Could you do a Smellershot?You know, Longshot and Smellerbee, the boy and girl from Jet's Freedom Fighters that turned good? I ship Smellershot, too. Yes, yes, I know, I'm a big shipper. XD What of it?

-Spade

You did a great job with this! Especially little Kya being as wise as Iroh at age three; that's so adorable.

I've got an awesome idea: you should do the cabbage man singing to his cabbages.

Interesting. I liked all the lullaby chapters, but this last one was a little too cheesy for me, sorry! Lol. It seemed kinda out of place as well since it wasn't in first person or following any one character. I get it as a sort of tie in, but I don't think this fic needed a tie in.

Oh well, overall great fic!

Aww that was really really sweet! Did you make up those nursery rhymes? I really liked them.

lol...that was funny the baby did NOT like his singing! XD it just made things worse! lol that was a funny one! X3

aawww! that is so cute! Dai is my favorite of them X3 cause he is Toph And Teo's Child XD

Awwwwwwwww!8D Teoph forever! w thats so cute! love it

Hehe, I love the Gaang's children arguing about their parents. It made me happy.

;D

That was absolutely FANTASTIC can't wait for your next stories.

, it wz so cute! only prob i had wit it wz dat 1 of them could air/waterbend. i thought only the avatar cud do dat.(Fact: the avatar is the only person who could/can bend multiple elements.)

Ahh i love it, it's cute and lovely and funny :D