It was really cute! Though, the bedroom-kiss scene was an explosion in my eyes; my favorite moment! Great work :)

awah this was so cute :) i loved the tulip idea :D favouriting this story :D

Loved it, loved them.!

awwh i loved this story especially with the tulips at the end

Oh gosh, I love this! Lily was so vibrant, here! I love how she's got that 'hero complex' because it just adds this side to her I never would have considered.

Teddy was just yummy/lovely/gorgeous as well, which can never be a bad thing :D

I'm finding it really hard to believe you've never written them before :o You really clicked with them!

Oh, my. *drops 'Ted and Vic 4eva' flag on the floor in surprise*

But as much as I'm a Teddy/Victore fan and almost cried in anguish when you broke off their engagement *harrumphs* this was really, really, good. I mean, I like your characterization of Lily, the background info, there was enough details to bring the whole plot together...

So you see, I was extremely pleased when I read this. For your first attempt at Lily/Teddy, this is super awesome. Yay!

Hey

I've just finished reading your story. I've always been Twilight crazy but now i am tempted to write a Harry Potter fanfic as well :P

Thank You Thank YOU THANK YOU

for writing this story it had been a big inspiration.

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Okay, so, oh my God. This was epic and brilliant and beautiful and amazing and, crap, you really dedicated it to me?

This was so heart-wrenching and aching but also incandescently wonderful. It was very sort of pure, and I just loveadorewanttomarry your Teddy in so many ways. You had him and Lily feeling so deep and so 3D it's like they were right there in the screen in front of me.

Gosh, I want to leave you the longest review in the world proclaiming your wonder and the beauty that was this fic, but I need to go to bed before I'm caught up and oh, god, THIS WAS PURE BRILLIANCE.

Seriously. I cannot tell you in how many ways I loved this. Your plotline and your metaphors (I adored the whole hero/princess thing), and that mention of Lily having a hero complex - heck, I haven't heard a better way to describe her in ages!

You should be extremely proud of this, it is absolutely magnificent.

Lovee it! I liked that you had Lily spend the summer with a new character instead of the Uncle Charlie stand by. You made her very likeable by having her be heartbroken but never whiny. She does her best to make good out of a terrible situation! And you also don't make Vic some demon character!

This story was so great. Please write a chaptered Lily/Teddy fic we need more of your great writing.

Here we go! I promised to read it and I did. I have to say, it was amazing. I liked the way you wrote Teddy and Lily and the fact that you didn't ignore Victoire (although I feel so sorry for her). I loved the description and the plot and just everything really. It was really well written. Just a question though, this isn't part of Corridors & Secret Passageways is it? Because that would mean that James and Olly don't get together because it just said they were friends. Anyway, it was just brilliant. Incredibly written and it made me quite like a pairing that I never liked before. Thanks for the part dedication too. He definitely is one of my favourite characters (a mix of Remus and Tonks? What could be better? Well I suppose a mix of Angelina and George..but anyway, you get the point). It was just superb. Splendiferous work!

I love it! Yes I do. :) LilTed is my favorite pairing ever

and you really did them justice with this fic. Write more of them, please? If you do, I'll love you forever!

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