Wow. I wonder what the germophobe side of Brian is thinking. Probably washing himself down with Lysol later. The things he does for dexter...

Awww I love the twist here. Instead of laughing as Dexter scrambles, Brian is just went full “I will die for you.” Adorable

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I thought instead of "You're like a butterfly" He said "Your life is a lie."

Why did Brian have to diee

This is just...incredibly amazing. I am watching again first seasons of Dexter and the story with his brother caught my interest while it did not few years ago.
I was so sad Dexter murdered him... Then I felt the need to read things about it ! And I found yours ; I have to admit, the best one I read so far and surely the best out of all. I really took pleasure to read and even cried like a baby at the end, listening to the serie's soundtrack... From chapter one to chapter twelve, I was always eager to read more ; I read it whenever I could, in the parisian subway, during my lunch break... I was really into it, imagining Christian Camargo acting and everything. I found it very realistic.

Really, I loved it and thank you for this.

I cried at the end there poor Biney! Ugh why did he have to die?! It upset me so much when they killed him off and seeing this just mad me even sadder :'( Great story, I enjoyed reading it eve if I did cry
-MBL

Oh my god, I just finished reading this, and it's so sad. I was hoping it wouldn't end the same way, but I guess I saw it coming since there weren't more chapters. It was so much sadder hearing it from Brian's perspective. He put so much work and love into his meeting wirh Dexter, only to be betrayed. And yet he still loved him all the way to the end. And the most he ever got was a hug, but each time Dexter was either unconscious or tense. I so want to change the ending TT~TT I really enjoyed it though, I'm sad it's over.

The story was done so beautifully. I applaud you. You had me crying at the end. You did such an amazing job

Absolutely brilliant! I love your portrayal of Brian- the ending was so horribly sad, but very well written- I loved how Brian never blamed Dexter. The ending nearly made me cry!

This was a very sad, but good story. Thanks for posting.

Awesome!

I've read all your fiction, despite I'm french. Ididn't even need any extra translator. It sucks the style, according to me. And I'm against laziness. xD

So. I just loved it. The way you depicted the way of thinking of Brian is so amazing... How he hates everybody, wants to kill everybody, how he is motionless... Splendid. And how he wants his brother back.

I jumped when I saw your fiction. When I saw the first season of Dexter, I wondered how could be the point of view of Brian, who is a so interesting character... I'm just desgusted when I saw the last minutes of his live. They dared to kill him...

I'd like to translate your fiction, this one, in french. May I ? It will be a such honor to share this work with other french people.

Thank you for this text. And I hope you'll update soon your other fiction, "A new normal".

Bye !
Owl'

Hey! First of all, I'm truly sorry for never letting a review before. Now that I've apologized, and I hope you forgive me, let's go to my impressions.
It's a marsterpiece! I mean it! First, it was a brilliant idea to bring to the light Brian's perspective of everything. Second, you constructed a very real portrait of a psychopath. The way he relates to the world around him, how he sees people, the anger, the need to kill, everything. You really get the point of the character, as was your wish. I like the irony, the sarcasm, the lack of emotion in the words you used in your text. Definitely, a great fic! Congrats!
I don't know if yyou remember, but I asked a time ago, to make a Portuguese version of this, and to publish it. You gave me authoryzation, and so I did it. I started posting tonight. I'll send you the link, in a PM. Probably you'll not understand that, but I assure you that a was very faithfull to your own words. )
Sorry if there's something wrong here, I1m not that good writing in English as I am reading. Anyway, congrats for that, and thanks again for allowing me to show this to others in my native language.

Wow. I like how even to the very end, he can't be mad at Dexter. He blames everything on a dead man. I wonder what's really the case with that?

Anyway, this was brilliantly done. Good show.