I love this story :D Even though it's really dark and the ending's kinda scary, I think it's worthy of being continued :) And I hope you do that some day :)

oh my god! where's the second chapter!

This is amazing!

Like oh my god!

DUDE!

Please let there be a second chapter!

~Animelover

I so appreciate this perspective. What it looks like when you don't know these aliens well, don't know if they mean you well or harm, and the whole world going to hell, at least your personal world because they happened to chase some 'cons through your town. It is dark, but I hope you continue it.

Damn, you know how to leave us shaking the screen, you know that? Good start. Interesting to see where you take this.

Somehow, after reading this, it is no surprise that some people dislike the Autobots. In a way, it underlines the words of the sheriff and the one guy in the most recent chapter of Holding on to the Future.

This the one you mentioned on chat? I'm loving it already. Dark and sad it maybe, but its realistic.