Clarification: Ah... I made that comment before the bar scene. Wow. Yeah, very OOC.

RE to Luciendar: While they are OOC, it’s not ridiculously so; more like a reinterpretation and exaggeration of how they actually behave. Kakashi was a terrible teacher and he did overwhelmingly favour Sasuke. Sasuke was an arrogant fuckwit. Sakura was a superficial and fanatical fangirl. Naruto did wear a mask, under which he was secretly bitter and surprisingly smart. You get the point.

All of your characters are extremely OOC. They don't sound anything like themselves.

Good story!

Love it. Sad it’s so short but it’s the price to pay for op Naruto lol

I liked the chapter!

I like it!

The ending is excellent little rushed for my taste story overall was great. that and anko Naruto love stories are my favorite

Thanks really good

Loved the story thank you

Great story.

J'aime beaucoup bien que tu aurais pu faire un trio avec Hinata.

I think she'd like to rub off on him in another way ;)

love your a/n here, and it nipped my own feelings about the scene in the bud. I couldn't even be upset about it either cause I was laughing too hard. great story and progression thus far, I might have more to say once I'm done.

just out of curiosity, whatever happened to duck-butt Sasuke, and Kakashi? You never did tell us what happened afterwards. Above all, real nice story, hope there is a sequel.