Reviews for Wizard's Chess |
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Toaofwriting chapter 1 . 3/3/2013 A very good story, both well-written and funny. I would've liked Dumbledore to say, "Gandalf, you're late" and then Gandalf could've replied with his famous line from Fellowship of the Rings, but otherwise great. |
SerbiaTakesCtrl chapter 1 . 10/19/2011 I'm going to go into Semi-Editor Mode, if that's alright? First off, I really like the idea, but of course I already told you that before. It's a beautiful concept, being who the two characters are, and I find myself smirking at context you've placed either of them in: From what I can tell, they're also pretty much in-character, but honestly, it's a one-shot so there's usually not too much revealed (Though, I have to say, for how short this is I think you did a damn well job). The narration is simple and just as easy-moving as your other piece with Hermione, which I still think is a really unique if not alien concept. I think I'm actually going to go read it again if I have time before class. I also like your dialogue, I wanna see more of it soon, m'kay? Later~ |
Silverdragonstar chapter 1 . 7/31/2011 "And they could try their best to cream each other in Wizard's Chess." HA HA Love it just too cool! So that is how Dumbledore handles the stress! |
Lord Siravant chapter 1 . 1/8/2011 Short, but I liked it. |
Aranel Mereneth chapter 1 . 12/11/2010 AWESOME! D |
DayDreamingDormouse chapter 1 . 8/21/2010 Short, but I liked it. I often thought how similar Gandalf and Dumbledore are - and that they are friends in this story makes me happy. Both finding a bit peace in each others company from their wars ... yep, a good thought. |
AnimeIceFox chapter 1 . 7/25/2010 That was actually quite good. It was a nice little friendship story. _ Good Job! |