HOLY COW!
Your right,
There styles are similar

Wait
Is regrets the elric’s father?

This chapter was pure epic

LIZVY FOR LIIIIIIIIIIFE

Oh judgement, I shall donate 750,000 cenz for your funeral! At least you may rest in peace, right?

I hope that Ed's hospital bills aren't too much... I'll give you 35,000 cenz.

Izumi was dead by the time that Alphonse used Wrath to open the Gate.

Or its that chick from way back when, but there is no way that that would be possible since shes been dead for god knows how long. And there is no way they would be THAT FREAKING SIMILAR. And she probably would have been dead for god knows how long. OH AND SHE WOULD HAVE USED HER EARLIER! But this is just part 2 to my rant since i mentioned the clone thing. I made the connection after about the spite thing, literally right after i posted, but then i realized the similarities and that it would just straight up be.. well... Idiotic. Just that they would be THAT BLOODY SIMILAR. Anyway, that is all.

AMEC

Alright, so i was originally reading the rewrites and such and when it cut off because it needs to be updated, i went back here because i was curious. Scandalous, i know. i would normally leave a huge, huuuuge rant about the story once i have finished it, but im technically actually reading the rewrites so im gonna cut off from this story now. But, i wanted to say something now that... well was nagging me. Specifically... Just.. The new homunculi. I mean.. Okay, they are literally bridging everything with their names. The originals did do this but really not this close, and while they arent the originals and its yours to make.. it bugs me. And im not saying it sucks, but i find it weird with their names and behavior. Spite practically keeps saying 'cuz im Spite' and ive only known her like two or three chapters. And Desire.. he just basically tried to rape Winry. His name is Desire but... Desire in itself is just wanting something badly. It doesnt directly translate to smexy times. Lust for anything should be what Desire is if it were coming down to names! Lust is a strong sexual want/desire/whatever! I mean, true the homunculus tied with their names but not this close and not all of them did! And i can already see where Spite is going, and while im sure its probably not EXACTLY this, i have a really weird feeling that its going to be that shes like a clone or something.. well not clone, thats not the right word at all or what i mean, but im gonna assume its going to be a similar situation to with how Edward and Wrath were. Except instead of an arm and a leg im assuming that she was created somehow with all the gate travelling and Dante wanted to do it to, as her name is funny enough, spite them. Its going to basically be the homunculous verion of her im assuming. And.. Seriously? I mean.. SERIOUSLY? WHERE DID SHE GET ALL OF THESE HOMUNCULUS'S?! I MEAN... it was barely preformed, hell the 7 she did get were years and YEARS apart. Its not as if she can pick them from a catalog, SO WHERE THE HELL DID SHE GET 7 ALREADY?! I mean, if they were all just hanging around and she knew they were, why didnt she get more than 7 before? And theres the fact that she would have.. how long was it? 4 years? 4 YEARS TO FIND 7 ARTIFICIALLY CREATED HUMANS THAT, WERE EXTREMELY RARE AND ARE ONLY CREATED THROUGH A HUGE TABOO THAT ONLY FEW HAVE ACTUALLY DARED TO DO. AND, CREATING A HOMUNCULOUS ISNT EASY EITHER, MOST THAT HAD CREATED ONE WERE LIKE ALCHEMY OBSESSED PEOPLE-ISH SO... AND IF ANYONE ARGUES THAT SHE COULD HAVE CREATED THEM, WHY WOULD SHE GO THROUGH THE ANNOYANCE OF CREATING A HOMUNCULOUS?! I MEAN, TRUTH COULD HAVE EASILY TRIED TO GET HER IF SHE EVEN DARED TO DO THAT, SHE PROBABLY WOULDNT BE ALIVE OR SOMETHING. AND SHE WOULDNT GO THROUGH THAT MUCH TROUBLE JUST TO MAKE ONE TOO. AND HOW DID SHE FIND THEM? WAS SHE JUST ACTIVELY SEARCHING THE WORLD FOR HOMUNCULOUS AND FOUND 7 MIRACULOUSLY?! And if you also argue that 'oh they were around for years', again, i think she would have found them before. and the stones keep them alive, they wouldnt know about the stones without her, so they probably would have died or something. And i feel like these homunculous are a little OP. i mean the others were OP too but they had their limits. I mean, teleportation AND alchemy? I mean im sure theres a reason behind it but COME ON! the only reason wrath could do alchemy was because he had the arm and leg. And, i mean... Im pretty sure being telekinetic doesnt mean you can move fire. No, the limits are drawn there im pretty sure. I mean.. fire isnt really.. i mean i dont have research on this but that just sounds wrong. Fire doesnt really have.. form..? Eh, hard to explain, and i could easily be wrong with that nitpick. And.. I mean, in the series at the beginning, the homunculus seemed pretty damn one-dimensional until later on but.. i mean.. They dont even seem to like her. I mean the others didnt really but they had goals and such and while im guessing its told later... I mean, just the way they act, they dont seem to really have anything. i mean, sure they follow orders but they dont seem the most motivated, ya know? And i know this is all going to get rewritten eventually and this is probably gonna get better later anyway, as ive only known a few of them for like 2 chapters, i still cant help but get annoyed. And while im not really giving them a chance i guess.. I dont know. i mean, i found the first and second well enough, i read the first only in the rewritten and switched to these after the fourth chapter in the second rewrite since it was done and i was curious. But this one.. just.. It seems rushed almost. Well, not rushed but it has a different vibe. i mean i read the second one in the full 'old' version or whatever and it felt fine but this one gives me the weird vibes. Like, while it is explained through her getting her attacks and all, Liz seems a lot weaker in this one, even considering her circumstances. im assuming this will eventually have a plot point as it was either forget or live through it, but still. Oh! and.. how the hell did she get whats her faces body? I mean she had all that crap on her, and i highly doubt her body would be in one piece or anything. Or.. not horribly mangled, or bloody. And while im confident she could repair any cuts or whatever, i have a feeling she wasnt the freshest when she found her. And.. WHY GO FOR HER?! I MEAN SHE WAS LIKE DEAD. WHY NOT JUST KIDNAP SOMEONE WHOS ACTUALLY.. YA KNOW?! I mean Dantes not really one for simplicity, she wouldnt be this difficult. And that chick was from a different world.. Well actually she could have taken the other version of her.. it still raises the question of why her i guess. I have the oddest feeling that the other version is dead. Or not in reach of Dante. And i could bring up the subject of Truth and the resurrection of the Homunculi, but that would just delve into another realm of madness that would probably just be answered later. So.. I guess thats it for now. i actually like this over trilogy, its just this last one is really poking me in a bad way. First half was okay, 7 and up were weird. I was half tempted to question why take her.. and her alone, instead of the brothers, i mean technically it was really just the brothers that really messed it up. But then i would have to shrug it off since it seems to be these stories trend. Which, is getting a little bit... repetitive, instead of 'ha ha she always gets kidnapped'. Nah, its not as if they could have easily kidnapped a bunch of the others where Dante could have exacted her revenge!.. No, not at all. Its not as if Malice could have just went in and out quickly without a problem, without talking or anything.. no.. But the show wasnt perfect either, but... i mean... I know its hard to come up with your own story-thing based off of something else but JEEEZUS! I mean.. god! I love this but it has so many weird flaws and plot holes (if they can be called that at least). this last one feels half-arsed i guess. I mean, im sure a lot of hard work was put into this, blood sweat and tears, but it just feels so weird in my gut. Like something was different when you were writing this. maybe you werent as into it. I mean its not half-arsed, thats not what im saying, but im getting that feeling of either when the writer isnt happy with what they wrote or if its half-arsed. you get the vibes. and as i said, im not saying its bad. Hell, i mostly had a blast while reading this. But.. Its just.. i dont know. i figured i would just give my current opinion, and while im sure everythings fine later, i unfortunately wont get to read it until the rewrite comes out because im stubborn and set in stopping now. I apologize as im not signed in so you cant reply or anything, but im kind of happy im not mainly because i feel bad for saying all this. Mainly cuz i enjoy this story, but it feels like something that would be written by a very young person. Like, 'oh ed and al defeated them but now they gotta face the new ones!'. very.. kiddish feel. Not that its like.. uncreative or anything, but i feel like this would be the story behind something like a kids toy.. well.. Minus all the angst.. i guess. this has gone on long and its hard to describe what i mean, but take happiness in that i enjoyed this, even though i kind of ranted pretty badly there... Sorry! *huggles* i didnt mean it in a bad way, just critiquing.

AMEC

Tears are the greatest weapons against men!

Hehehe, to the next base we go!

I KNOW WHO REGRET IS! ITS HUGHES ISNT IT?!

I really dont like Winry in this story.

PLEASE! Let this one have a happy ending.

Bravo, bravo and well done! Not sure if I reviewed the first two books, but just in case I didn't: this whole trilogy is wonderful! For some reason, EnvyxOC fics seem to be really well written, and I don't know if that holds in general, but it certainly holds for you! Sure, there were a few typos here and there, but the OC's were so well-written and interesting, and the canon characters were so spot-on, that a few spelling and grammar issues are a very minor demerit.

Also, I love how you mixed in some Brotherhood elements, like the Briggs reference and Truth. Especially Truth, he/she/it is awesome!

Easily one of my favorite FMA fics thus far. And a trilogy at that! And Dante finally gets what's coming to her. Good riddance!

Awesome characters, awesome story. I laughed, I cried, I shook my fists and ground my teeth. It takes talent to evoke such emotions from me in a story, but you have definitely succeeded. Thanks for such a wonderful experience! Cheers!