THIS HURTS LIKE HELL OH MY GOD

THIS WAS SO GOOD!

You have such a sheer talent for writing, keep it up!

very cute, great time line you imagined

Wow!

This is my first time reading this pairing.

Interesting style. I think the flashbacks really work because the images and dialog are so strong.

I think you've done a marvelous job here.

As a reader, I quickly and easily got to know and came to like both of them. I definitly felt the softly tragic ending.

That is so sad sweat. That i feel tears in my eyes just about to fall, but yet know, they never would.. Because she is smiling and according to the other story of yours she shed enaugh tears.

Aww, that was sweet. I love how her face is 'built for laughing' because when you hear that, you can never really picture it, but you know that there's such a thing. That was a really good story, and I liked how you did it!

Regulus is a fascinating character and I love how you portrayed him. He's overshadowed by his brother and resentful of being the overlooked brother (or at least that's what I got out of the Sirius/Regulus rivalry you painted). The tragedy of his unrequited crush on Marlene was gorgeously written.

Amazingly well written and favorited! Thank you very much for posting this beautiful piece of work.

I like the little glimpse we get to see here of the Sirius/Regulus rivalry, and the look we get into Regulus' character and life, but I think the last sentence of this story really clinches it for me, just perfect!

Wow. I love it. Very well written and I literally hung onto every word. They make a fantastic couple. :D

I love this. I'm glad it didn't work out, because if it did, then it wouldn't suit the piece. You're a great writer, and I hope to read some more of your fics soon.

I love this! I was so excited to read a Regulus/Marlene, and this didn't disappoint- I love how it was told in flashbacks. I think your characterization of both Reg and Marlene were perfect. And I loved the part where Marlene said she liked kissing Reg more than Sirius.

And the last line was so hauntingly perfect.

Thank you so much for participating in my challenge, I really enjoyed reading this!

Wonderfully done. I love the First Order and that sort of era, and given that I don't know much about Marlene McKinnon it was an interesting, and different, read.

Nice work :)

This is so terribly sad! I'm really about to cry, I just can't get over it. Poor Regulus, we all know in the end he made the right choice but to have loved like that. To of loved and never gotten anything in return, never gotten a happy ending. His last memory is her laughter. So tragic. :[

That was a very interesting concept, and written well, clearly and crisply. I really like your style. Favorited!

Nora xx

Wow. I really enjoyed this. The ending was unexpected - I was assuming she was going to die and not him - but perfect and... haunting for lack of a better word. Good job with the flashbacks, they flowed really nicely. Great job!