I don’t get Elizabeth, she adores Eric on site and doesn’t get completely turned off by the fact he hates her, she just goes along with being given to a vampire who clearly hates her. And to top it all off she’s constantly emotional. Not my favourite character but hopefully she develops in a good way throughout the story.

The domestic abuse is strong in this chapter

Eric is so Eric I love it! Ellie is an emotional wreck, most times, but her character is developing and it's something to see how she will grow up in the series. Thanks for writing this!

Very interesting start! So glad I found your fic today :)

Awesome story I love it

i can imagine godric can read everyone like an opened books, he is very old and seems to know everything

This was totally different from what I have expected - angst should probably be one of the themes if not a trigger warning disclaimer at the beginning for the more sensitive. It was still well written and enjoyable. I loved how well and canon-like Eric was in this story and not the mushy crap some authors pull, even if he was giving me whiplash with the hot and cold act of his. I am still undecided on what I think of Ellie but the story definitely could have used more Godric - and maybe not written them off as siblings... Well, I guess sequels will tell as I am going to check them out.

update i love it

Oh my gosh! Such an amazing story! I love Elizabeth! And Godric is such and amazing character here! I wasn't so sure about Eric though! I hated him through much of this story. Ellie gave him way more chances than I would have! No matter how good looking he is! I'm just glad he finally pulled his head out, in the end! Can't wait to read the sequel!

I'm so sad its over, but I'm glad they got their happy ending. Thanks for posting!

Gosh darn it... It's been a while since I've caved at the roof scene, with all the True Blood fan fictions I've been reading lately, but I caved on this one. Spectacular writing, and I can't wait to get started on the next installment of this series. :3

I finally got around to reading it! ;) At times it was both humorous, and aggravating, but altogether amazing. This is an incredible story, sorry for the lame review, but I need to read the sequel! :)

I love this series now I'm ready to read part 2 of your story :)

Great fanfic! Definitely enjoyed reading it! Now on to the sequel!

Nice