Loved it! :) :)

You should write a story where Jacob is a werewolf and Edward is a human! When Jacob was human, he and edward hated each other. But Edward and Jacob had the same Quileute friends. But then Jacob imprinted, so he needs to make edward fall in love with him, starting by being acquaintance to friends to best friends to lovers ( once edward know about the imprint). Make Edward be in love with someone else, while Jacob is trying to win him over. Make Jacob be completely submissive to Edward after the imprint.

I really enjoyed, the plot was cute and realistic.

I really loved this story! It was so interesting seeing the two of them interact, without any of the drama from the canon love triangle or personal history getting in the way. You really made the whole plot believable. I don't usually like reading fics with Jacob as the protagonist, but I was drawn in by his frank thoughts and emotional upheaval. I really cared about these two as the story progressed.

It was 4 a.m. when I started reading this after waking far too early and clicking a link that I saw on twitter. Someone asked for a rec for sweet/sexy/non-drippy love story and that request led me here. Now that I think about it, I'm not entirely sure that non-drippy is the correct phrasing, but I know what I mean. LOL. It's possible that I would think a little more clearly if it wasn't so early. It's also possible that my typing would be better if I put my glasses on. Instead, I'll carry on typing quietly with one eye shut and hope that you don't judge me for my typos.

This story is just as good as I remember it. Now, that's a lie. It's better. I'm not sure that I've read a better Jake, and I've read a lot. It's quite annoying as I've written a few too, but I don't think that I've ever captured the essential Jake-ness of him in the way that you have. He's quite lovely, as is your Edward. I love their voices which are pitch perfect IMO.

Yup, this story was a lovely benefit to waking up far too early. Tomorrow I'll be editing a Jake-heavy chapter of Twinned3 and I'll keep your Jake in mind while I do it. He's become my subconscious benchmark, and it was lovely to reconnect.

Hope that this message finds you well.

Kate x

Interesting prompt and you did really well with it. A great o/s that has possibilities if you want to continue it. I sure wouldn't mind reading more lemons about 'cool' Edward and 'hot' Jake together. I liked the idea that Jake could think up what he would like Edward to do with his bod!

Jasper and Edward stories are usually my main focus for reading and writing, but this was an exceptional and very enjoyable change.

Loved how you showed Edward gradually getting to know and then falling in love with Jake - so much better than the immediate attraction which happens in most stories.

Sue xx

Wow, what a great story! It was recommended on a thread on the Twilight Fanfiction Rec page. I don't know how I missed it, but I'm so glad I've read it. Would love to read more. Just lovely, and great writing. Thank you!

Nancy

Wow, a really good, not cheesy or cliched Edward/Jacob fic. I'm beyond thrilled! There are so few of these around.

This is so well written and was such a pleasure to read. Thanks so much for sharing!

This was such a pleasant read. I loved every word of it :)

I found a rec for the story on vampireisthenewblack's blog. I'm very grateful that I did!

This is absolutely wonderful! Sweet and funny and, eventually, very, very hot! I liked that Jacob had to 'woo' Edward a bit first.

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I really liked that. It was sweet

THAT. WAS. HOOOOOOOOOOOOT.

Very nice, love your Jake it was nice that there was no Bella, that would have made it angsty this was more feel good