"You're just jealous that you don't have a superman to rescue you." I legitimately died.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FLUFFY MOMENT.

hi ive been reading your vision series and i like them very much have to stop reading now as my eyes are blurringim on vision3 ch 2 ill pick up here tomorrow nite. thanks phyllis

I just finished reading this story and thought it was very good.

I'm looking forward to more Vision stories.

Thank you.

YOU'RE INCREDIBLE!

Have I mentioned how much I love your Vision's series? I love stories with the brothers bonding. Dean always there when Sam needs him. They're so adorable together. You're stories are well written, and mostly they are well characterized. Can't wait to see what you have for the next story (Visions 5 lol) If you like, I can translate this series to spanish. I think spanish readers will be happy and grateful with you...

Anyway, awesome chapter!

Sam is the rescuer this time, though at a cost to his health. Now for the others to think about his talent...

Oh crap, I hope Sam was prepared for more than just one water spirit. If not, he better get his family out of that cage fast!

I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.

Thank you.

The cat's out of the bag with Jim and Bobby. At least they're giving Sam the benefit of the doubt regarding what he sees.

Good start. I love Sam's visions. The cell phones in high school threw me off a bit. I'll have to check the dates, but cell phones were still just getting started when the boys would have been in high school and not everyone had them- at least pocket sized at any rate. They were in high school in the late 80s, right?

I'm intrigued to see what youll do with this story. I'm so glad Bobby and Pastor Jim have shown their belife in Sam and his visions.

I will definitely be back. Nice start and interesting story idea.

And I love vision- Sammy ;) … even it’s hard to read that he suffered from them as ‘kid’

Greetings Lia

This a very good 1st chapter. I'm looking forward to more.

Thank you.

Good story - very interesting premise. I haven't read any of the Visions series, but I think I will check them out.