Whilst I find no flaws in your writing style, I find quite a few in Iralen. I haven’t read the whole story, but so far, she has a lot of traits that belong to a Mary Sue.
Look, I don’t even know if she’s an original character, but having everyone instantly liking her, continuously describing her stunning looks, and have her fight yetis despite bing injured, that’s quite a bit overpowered.

Wow. Just wow. Can't think much past that.

Yeah! Now... How bout a sequel?

This is awesome but 2 things in it just don't seem right to me 1 drizzt wouldn't bitterly resent iralen for collapsing in his cave almost no matter what he would be relieved that she did so they could save her . and 2 drizzt grew up in menzobaranzon and where it you weren't aware of all the things around you at all times you died and so no one ever snuck up on drizzt and yet amamdir did just that somehow. These are just not right in my mind

That was a pretty excellent little tale. Thank you for sharing.

I loved the story! My only wish is that it were longer. Anyways, great job!

I LOVED this story! Excellent all around. Thank you!

Love your fanfic you're a greate writer and you have found a wonderful storyline I was totally enthralled good to see a finished fanfic for once, cheers (:

But Drizzt did kill lots of elves (might be drow (defiantly drow) although they hate to admit it) so you were wrong but by god this was a wonderful story (although i like Catti-Brie and Drizzt or even better Me and Drizzt a girl can dream) and i could only find that one thing wrong so bravo i love it.

I love Forgotten Realms FanFiction! The wording is almost always intricate and enjoyable, not like some of the trash people put on this site occasionally.

You should make a sequel. This was really good.

Great storyline!

I loved this story, thank you for writing it. I almost wish this was how the story actually goes.

I love this story, I've been thinking of starting to read the Forgotten Realm novels and I just bought Gauntlgrym: Neverwinter Saga, Book I. and also have The Two Swords. where do you think I should start reading in the series?

I have no idea what Forgotten Realms is, but I loved your Loki pieces so much, that I just had to read more of your writing. And, as with the others, this is excellent! Please publish more soon!