Reviews for Fall away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this story. Canon never tells us what happened between the infamous party and when they meet again in college, so it's fun to read new takes. I'm buying Naomi as a busker ... but I would have expected more folk and protest songs. ;) (I do, however, love these music choices.) Incidentally, while I don't disagree with what you (Naomi) says here about sexuality and labels, I don't think it's as uncommon as you think. For instance, Kathryn Prescott herself says something very similar: . ?f9&t19 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant Story! |
![]() ![]() thankyou for the update :) i missed this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Better late than never. I'm glad you are writing this story again! Lovely chapter, was glad to see them share some happy times together, though I'm hoping that if Naomi has to go to Cyprus, she can invite a certain someone to go with her :) Thanks for writing, happy new year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to have this story back...although I did have to go back and re-read the last few chapters lol. Lets hope the motivation continues. Update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() wow ty for updating and im sorry about your operation and i really hope naomi changes her mind about going to cyprus i know emily will miss her so much if she goes and again thank you for updating |
![]() ![]() please update this story soon i would love to know what happens next oh and btw i love your other story and please update it soon too please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. I just read this whole story in one go and I love it! It's amazing! I really like how the story is playing out, Naomi being a performer is awesome, in this story I can really see her as an acoustic performer at a little pub. I love how their relationship started and how it remained close to the show, but had its own special touches. I really like you song choices as well. My favorite is probably Perfect by Hedley, I love Hedley and i've always thought that song would be perfect for Naomi and Emily. If you need a happy, kinda loved up song you should hace Naomi sing All About Us by He Is We, I love them and I think it would be cute. I think my favorite part so far was when Naomi grabbed Emily's hand and said that they were together. :D Oh well, I just thought I'd let you know how amazing I think this story is, and I can't wait for the next update. I love your other story as well, you are fantastic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuuuuute chapter this one! Naomi is getting pretty confident about them being together, and I just love it! Now I can't wait to see how all the others are going to react to Emily's coming out! Hug for your update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo yo yo :) Cool chapter, was wondering where you'd disappeared off to haha. I freaking hate hospitals... D: I think this story still has places to go, so don't wrap it up just yet! :o I still like it :) Hope you keep going with this, update soon and most off all get better! :D I'll sit here with my perfect health whilst grooving along to some nineties boy bands :D I'm a cool kid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well naomi turned out surprisingly confident at the end of that chapter. Will it be smooth sailing from now on...? Update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() love how naomi took charge right at the end and 'im katie fucking fitch i can do anything' pure classic :D loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed this chapter! thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww I hope emily can now start to forgive naomi and work towards a lovely relationship :) Update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww Naomi when are you going to learn?im so happy for Katie in this...how she actually just said do something about it instead of moping around!ahauhauahauhau...i loved the song...i kind of wish i could actually see Naomi singing instead of imagining!but its great anyway so!hahahaha...i hope after that note Emily just goes and make things right with Naomi!looking forward to the next chapter!:) |