| Reviews for Rusted Wheel |
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   My-Crazy-Awesome-Sox chapter 6 . 6/3 Very well done! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/16 Cool loved it l.p. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/5/2019 You can't leave it there! (yes I appreciate this is years old, but even so!) Brilliant read. |
| PhoenixQueenHeart chapter 6 . 2/11/2019 Goodness me! I read this story years ago, and I came back for a revisit and... Boy, does it get my heart off its feet all over again! ... It's a SUPERP MASTERPIECE! Oh my god! I love it! Thank you for sharing such talent, passion, and inspiration with the world! ... Hat off |
| SaraBahama chapter 6 . 4/19/2018 Wow. Well done! |
| VampirateLycan1 chapter 6 . 4/1/2018 There's more right? Right? |
| Kaye brown chapter 6 . 1/30/2018 OK great but where is the rest |
| SheynaLew chapter 6 . 12/29/2017 I absolutely loved this fic. It had me hooked from the first few sentences. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/2/2017 Just...amazing storytelling! So vivid, t just stays with you even when it's over. I can't help wishing there was some inkling of a hopeful resolution but it doesn't take anything away from the story. Wish there was more. |
| Belen chapter 6 . 6/24/2017 Incredible! You have an amazing talent I read it in half a day couldn't put it down ! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/6/2017 Amazing, powerful storytelling. I'm in awe of your talent. I could not put this down and it's staying with me even though I have finished reading it. I wish you left us with a little more hope - just a glimmer that it will be fixed as I can't imagine Jack failing. Please...this deserves more! |
| redarien chapter 6 . 1/8/2017 Is she dead? ! I'm not ok with this ending. Please a sequel? Something! ! |
| Anna chapter 5 . 6/22/2016 I am so sorry, when I typed 'states' it should have read, 'stasis.' |
| Anna chapter 6 . 6/22/2016 I don't know how many times I've read this, but every time I am gripped anew by the strength of your writing. The perfect characterisation and the incredible mounting tension. Every time I read it I am desperately hoping that I have misremembered or misunderstood your ending! I don't suppose you could be persuaded to write an epilogue along the lines of, 'it was only states and now they know how to make her better'? That would really make me happy! |
| J chapter 6 . 5/2/2016 I found one of your storys and since I am reading everything you posted! I checked you profile and i really really really really want to belevie that you still write. I mean this story is so awesome! You got the characters. Intresting plot. It seemed the escape was the highlight and then fin. you know, that is not how it's done. there shold be intoducing, upbilding, climax, downbuilding, fin. You are a bad person! Really bad! Please update some day. I will read it :-D |
