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the concept is good but it is written strangely

I was so sure that Mordred and/or Morgana Le Fey we’re going to be mentioned! Lol, I guess my muse was rooting for it. Great story!

People do not "ban" together. They BAND together. Past tense is banded together, not banned. When something is banned it means you're not allowed to do it or have it. Learn English.

"severely clairvoyant"
severely means badly, as in severely injured. So Wyatt is badly clairvoyant? Is that even a thing? I'm pretty sure you didn't mean what you ended up typing. How about "highly clairvoyant"? Or "extremely clairvoyant"? I think those more accurately portray your meaning.

You need to learn the difference between a principle and a principal. A principal is the head of a school. A principle is a fundamental truth or proposition. You've been using the wrong word for some time now. Cut it out!

Why would Harry want all of the houses sold without ever even visiting them? This makes no sense to me. Even if he never wanted to return to England, one of them was in Italy. He could have kept it as a vacation home.

With how many rooms the castle has I'd think it could be turned into a new wizarding school. Cause thay many rooms is outrageous for any castle. Hell I dont think I've heard of any castle with that many rooms.

a wonderful story with well though out characters and explanations for their motivations and behavior. may you write many more of these stories.

A story that I got invested in and loved thx for writing this universe

This was a wonderful story. You kept up the pact so that there was no stopping in reading it fully. Great job!

I love the way you include cliff-hangers in your stories. Wonderful! Keeps me reading.

I've skipped this story for months because of the rape in the first chapter. When I read that, I cried. I loved the show Charmed. To put these two stories together is nicely done. Great job. Now on with then next chapter. Keep up the great work. I love your stories.

I love the idea for this story and where it is going but I think you moved it along a bit fast. Harry seems to have had no emotional reaction to being raped, abused and tortured and has carried in as nothing happened. I’m not hating just thinking maybe you should develop this more.

love it!