Erm you really need to look up about the game halo as it was never ever released on on playstaion as it is an xbox game only

I am so used to Third Person point of view this this is still new to me keep up this sweet work

I prefer the original version by Poison lol

What garbage. Hollow story with an emotionally stunted main character.

Went from a day in the life of story to a drama laced boohoo story. Bleh.

I love this story , but it left some unanswered questions, like Charlie and Bella's relationship, Trevor, and did Edward ever change Angela, and what about Mr. Larson, and on that note I felt like this story has great potential but it's incomplete.

oh no, Bella knows that Trevor has a crush on her even if she is married. I wonder if he will ever become a vampire. I really do hope that Bella really doesn't feel the same way Rosalie did, cause she should be happy she has her husband and a beautiful child right.

this was a good chapter as well. Glad that Angela and Edward got married. I wish Angela all of the best with her new husband.

oh no this isn't good the family would never forgive Rosalie Hale. She wouldn't be able to be around the baby no more right.

good chapter and the two has their child now that is good right. So the family is aunt and uncles and grandma and grandpa.

this was a good chapter as well. I hope that Bella is going to be alright during her time caring her baby right.

this was a good chapter as well. Wow that is different on how you tell your husband that you are expecting a baby right. I hope things work out for the best.

this was a good chapter as well. Glad these two gets along real good.

wow this was a good wedding well prepared and too bad her dad wasn't invited, but she did try to give him a lot of chances right. At least Renee and Phil was invited to the wedding and glad that they made it right.

this was a good chapter as well. I hope things work out this time, and no kissing ex's right.