Awwww so cute!

Loved it :D

Haha for a first fanfic this is awesome. It was very cute.

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! That was so cute! Especially the end!

And it was described so well! I luv ur writing style! I like the characters reactions! Especially Ciel's!

So... that means they are going to make out more?

~KPIEQ

X3

Happy writing!

Tee hee hee. That was awesome.

me likey 8D

Fave! 3

Lol, I really like this :] This is amazing for a first try! This is better than some ones I've seen from people who had been writing for way longer. Anyway, keep up the great work, and I hope to see more great things come from you :] Once again, wonderful job :]

That was cute. :) The only mistake I found was when you wrote:

"How was it Bocchan, did you enjoyed the 'lesson'?" dince the second part is already past tense with 'did' enjoued shouldn't have an 'ed' at the end. but that was the only mistake that caught my eye; cute fanfic, you should do more :D