Ahhhh, this was so intense! I loved the tone you used here and I like this just as much as I do the original story.

Why the hell haven't I read this before... It's beautiful! 33

This is, appalling, beautiful, indescribable, unlike any other fanfic between these two. I true treasure of its own, a jem among the rocks, no, a dimand-

I'm getting carried away here. It's just so-gah.

You've left me speechless

Beautiful story, absolutely beautiful. I was mesmerized by the diction of this story as well as the content, everything flowed and was beautiful. I also adore reading this from Alfred's POV, it simply fit and just seeing the possessiveness was wonderful. I am utterly amazed with this story and I am definitely looking forward to seeing more of your work. You have me completely speechless, wonderful job!

-CrescentLilly

That was really hot, I must say xD And I loved your descriptions!

;faldskf;a... maaaan... this... I've never read the original, but I might now that I've read this. As usual, you've made it exceptionally sexy while ridiculously adorable (well, not exactly, but that... that feeling of SHIT I NEED THIS) at the same time. Um I don't know if this was you or the original author, I'm assuming its you, but the use of "his dragonman" or "his human" made it especially poignant.

Yeah... ;-;

Also: YES TO BAFFLED KING :3

Okay so as I have told you countless times, your writing is gold. The best knd of gold. I can't even begin to express my thanks to you for writing this. Good Lord it was amazing. 3

*speechless*

Oh oh OH. That was beautiful 3 Not to mention hot :D