Reviews for Underneath It All
Guest chapter 25 . 4/3/2018
Incredible story first fic ive read all year and i was lucky enough to find such a beautifully written one
Talent oozed from every paragraph!
Sailoriris61 chapter 1 . 1/22/2018
I love this story. I can read it again and again and again. It's such a great story. I love your work. You are an awesome writer, don't let anyone say otherwise :)
UnholyVengeance chapter 20 . 8/14/2017
Imma whoop Hal's ass this fuckin bitch needs to swallow fuckin bleach (you see what I did there? [smdh I need to fund a hobby]
UnholyVengeance chapter 15 . 8/14/2017
I'm glad Renji's finally getting help, it'll take time, a lot of it, but I believe he'll get through it. I'm curious to see how things will go from there

Fuckin Rukia bitch ass -.-"
UnholyVengeance chapter 14 . 8/14/2017
Smdh Ichigo is such a forgiving person. He truly is. I need to take notes lol cause Imma spiteful ass bitch. I'll admit. Do me wrong and I'll do my worst to you, but Ichigo maaannn he's mature ass fuck. He truly is. My petty ass needs to take notes T.T

Bit how tf Renji not mad at Ikkaku but went ham on Ichigo?! *inhales* Boy...
UnholyVengeance chapter 13 . 8/14/2017
Maaaaannnnn Grimmjow or Ichigo should've knocked her out, bitch he don't want yooouuuuu! Fuck outta here!

But Shuuhei was FUCKIN IT UP ON THEM TURNTABLES MY NIGGA! HAD THE WHOLE CLUB ROCKIN! I was lit just from readin it! Lmaooooo

I got my GrimmIchi head \(_)/ been wanting Ichigo to deep throat that shit since the movie theater before that shushin ass bitch came . fuckin "sssssssssshhhhhh" ass bitch

Renji get a hobby -.-" maaaaannnn Renji boutta ruin everything, tch bruh can't never have a good time till Renji come and fuck it all up -_-" I'm still patiently waiting on Grimm to whoop dat ass

Ikkaku! You workin the bar bruh?! I thought he was one of the people who be jumping Ichigo?! (How you jump Ichigo for being gay but you work at a gay club bald head looking ass. Fuckin working with Yumi but can't fight Ichigo one on one five head ass. Wanna be Saitama Rihanna forehead look heasld ass)
UnholyVengeance chapter 12 . 8/14/2017
Grimmjow's daddy can come thrruuuuuu my nigga! BRING DAT ASS! Like yaaaassss Grimm Daddy yaaaassss!

Lmaooo Ichigo finna be throwin his ass soon ;3 and this bitch Tier need a hobby. Like girl! He. Don't. Want. You. Bitch. He. Done. what part of that don't Tier-how e understand?!
UnholyVengeance chapter 11 . 8/14/2017
Rukia-bitch/Bitch-Rukia/Little bitch/Bitch, Renji punk ass don't love you. He probably been in denial bout his love for Ichigo and is in denial bout his sexuality. He used you boo, and you played your dumbass self you decided to put dick before your friends and now it came back around to bite you in the ass lmaoook

Tier-hoe, you left Grimm without a goodbye so why you mad? Lmaooo he don't even like you no more bruh so fall back. Go back and get run through them trains like you were doing when you left Grimm bitch he don't want you no more.

Renji you gay, and you obsessed with Ichigo. Fall back, before Grimm beat dat ass
UnholyVengeance chapter 10 . 8/14/2017
Ichigo: It's been my pipe dream

Me: lol he hasn't laid down the pipe yet ;D
(Why am I like this)

Bitch talkin bout "ssssssshhhhh" NO BITCH YOU SSSSSSSSHHHH over here killing the potential movie theater head Ichi could've gave Grimm .

*in my Kevin Hart voice* talkin bout some damn "ssssssssshhhhhhhh" maaaannn they weren't even that loud you were ear hustlin bitch don't lie. *concieted face*

YAAAAASSSSS ROLLER SKATING! Maaaannn bought back memories, and their date was dope! I'm excited for moree!
UnholyVengeance chapter 8 . 8/14/2017
Idk why Shinji so salty when he knows Grimm didn't know anything about Ichi liking him. Plus he also knew Grimm was straight so even if he knew Ichi liked him it wouldn't of made a difference. Also just cause Ichigo liked Grimm doesn't mean Grimm's entitled to like him back. How you mad at the person your friend got a crush on when your friend the one who developed the crush on his own? Grimm didn't go out his way to start doing lovey dovey shit, he was cordial with Ichigo and kept it pushing, it wasn't like Grimm lead him on or some shit, so Shinji can miss me with that unnecessary saltiness. Take that shit up with your crushin ass homie not with me. Also how you stay mad but don't say shit irks me. If you that mad then something if you ain't gunna say shit and give me fucked up looks everytime you see me then stay your ass home, don't nobody want to deal with that shit.

But anyway, rant over lol, I'm glad when Grimm found out and discovered his feelings he did something about it instantly. Kudos to him!
meeksandkili chapter 10 . 4/8/2017
But like...he isn't gay he's bisexual. Bisexual people aren't mythical creatures and it makes more sense for him to be bi rather than completely switch his sexual orientation.
zingy2000 chapter 22 . 11/27/2016
Brrrrooooooo
First of all Ishin what the fack how are you going to just give up on your son like that RUDE.
Secondly I feel like ichigo would tell grimm to kill em I love this story btw
Guest chapter 3 . 11/14/2016
WHY MAKE RENJI SO MEAN AND PLS TELL WHY TF HE HATES GAY PPL SO MUCH WAS IT BECAUSE HE USED TO SUCK SALTY DICK FOR MONEY?! I.. I am sorry so Renji.. Jesus. Wow.. okay...Yep.
Guest chapter 25 . 8/20/2016
That was so sweet, I think I have a cavity.
Cloud Bearer chapter 20 . 8/2/2016
Og my god! That was just so fucking sad! And just while sad misic was playing in the room. Jesus...
Ichi will wake up, right...?
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