There needs to be a sequel with Jeff coming back and trying to kidnap Danny so he'll have a personal slave!

Keep Up The Good Work~!

Por favor continua plis esta muy interesante por favor sip plis

Por favor continua plis esta interesante por favor plis sip

whole story is adorable, so amazing.

LOVE IT

Dear Youngbountygirl,

You've got another follower! This story had a very cute ending, and I personally think that (if anybody cares to know, which I doubt you will) you should write a sequel! It would be a cute thing. I mean, like... about what life was like AFTER all that. It's just an idea, and maybe a lame one, but hey, everybody need some every once in a while. Good luck on your other ones, and I hope they're fantastic, even though I already know they will be.

Yours Truly and Every Writers friend,

P.B.

I loved the storyline, and I loved the fact that you tried your best to use proper grammar.

Really good. But one thing about this chapter. When Sam and Danny were in that one house, the one that had looked really old, she said, "She didn't eat anything with a face. Including Cheese and milk." Because she's a vegetarian. Actually, vegetarians will eat anything that COMES from the animal, but not the animal itself. Or any, for that matter. Vegan people are the ones who don't eat anything that comes from an animal OR the animal itself. Just a little heads up. They mean two different things, so really, she can eat dairy. Just saying.

I really love this story. I think you did a fantastic job on it. So, keep it up, please.

Make a sequel. What is going to happen. Will Jeff come back.

Eeeeeee! Yes. U r awesome! I cant wait see what happen next.

Great chap! :D

Great ending :) can't wait until the sequel

Whats in his pocket?...

Amazing chapter :)