Ooh I love this idea! Really fits Arthur's character, and as you said would actually be a real asset to someone in the dream business

This is adorable! I loved the concept, and Arthur’s initial reaction to his dream was as cute as it was funny. Lovely.

What a great little story concept to add depth to Arthur's character. Really enjoyed this orginal idea!

Wow that was great -even though i figured Athurs colorblindness out as soon as he asked for the apples- and it is well written and nice and somewhat deep, but on top of all that my favorite beer is Killian's Irish Red as well - and I'm german so that has to mean somethig. And I totally love the last sentence. Thanks for sharing.

That is pretty interesting, and would be an excellent as well as fascinating way to tell dreams from reality.

Aw how sweet! Lovely bit of writing here. Thanks for sharing!

-Shieldmaiden

This had my attention from the very beginning and kept it until the end, and I find you making Arthur colorblind to be absolutely genius. From the start I was excited to figure out how he knew the real from the dream, but I didn't even guess what it was up until you revealed it. Definitely fits in with the very nature of Inception, and I especially like how Cobb and Arthur are perfectly in character to the T. Extremely well done and thank you for the amazing read!

"My college professors all thought so. But my kindergarten teacher thought I was an idiot."

Ohmygod YES IM DYING!
:D sooo good

OH MY HOLY FREAKING GOD YOU'RE A BLOODY FREAKING GENIUS! HOLY FREAKING SHIT ! JUST... MIND BLOWING! LIKE, SERIOUSLY! MY BRAIN? ALL OVER THE PLACE! HOLY SHIT!

This is darn cool. Reaaaaally neat. As long no one knows about hiscolourblindness... XD
Cool stuff.

Pretty neat, although technically you aren't supposed to let anyone else touch your totem, so that was the only thing I didn't like - when Arthur lets Cobb touch the dice. Nevertheless, I still thought this was a cute short story.

This was fantastic! A brilliant idea, and it was written really well. Excellent job, and keep on writing!

This is a fascinating story! I found it on a favorites list and had to check it out. I love the way you write the characters and the friendship between them. And wow, what a surprise with Arthur's monochromacy! And he dreams in color! When you revealed that, I got chills. :)

Great job. It was really good.

Wow. That was amazing! Thank you!