Your an amazing writer. You made the story sound so real and I could just picture the image in my mind. Thank you for the awesome story. I love it! Hope you can write more stories. Thank you.

some of these exclamation marks are so unnecessary

it was really good :)

also, if there is a second life, let Charlie have learned his lessons on the uselessness of stubbornness...and pride and whatever else might have been part of his tragic end #drama

i hate this stubbornness how Charlie just died with all this shit between him and his daughters and Renee. But i do recognize that more often than not, such conclusions to conflict are the norm in reality. Here's to hoping there's a heaven in this fic and that R and C end up happier and together. Thanks for not dragging that particular part out

i hope she doesn't get pregnant yet. Such a cliche that would be

love the story but wish edward was the ceo

Great story, I liked that was different , but had same characters as Twilight.

Love reading your story.

That was an amazing story! I really loved it! It was so well written!

Great story, i love it!

Foi muito bom ler esta fic. Apesar de algumas partes passarem muito rápido, e faltar alguns fechamentos. Obrigada por compartilhar suas ideias. Beijos do Brasil!

xcellent story

wow

Enjoyed your story