Reviews for Am I? |
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nightshade chapter 4 . 1/28/2019 sooooooo cute |
Username12068 chapter 2 . 7/7/2018 After reading this I immediately hate this |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/10/2016 This just screams butt rape |
mrfire290 chapter 4 . 8/10/2015 but she is a human like any fucking 1kigyar or 2luguro or 3sanghelie can see through that or just raise a eyebrow and say wtf decription to names you should no as 1jackals / 2hunters/ 3elites you can tell your not stupid |
TheLinuxPenguin chapter 4 . 8/2/2015 This is very poor writing, I couldn't tell when you were making POV changes and the grammar is bad, which I am usually okay with, but this is just bad and cringe worthy writing Take a writing class or something dude |
ddan chapter 7 . 1/20/2015 Do you not ever finish a story I mean it's 2015 now and it ain't done yet so erg man |
Jdniscool chapter 5 . 8/25/2014 WOAH! Plot twist |
Jdniscool chapter 4 . 8/25/2014 cool. i liked how you paired them up |
Rose Tsukiyomi chapter 7 . 4/19/2014 Well I think they were indeed amazing. But yes please! I definately want more and to see a different version (perhaps longer and more detailed) version of this story, it indeed was tantalizing and titillating. |
Rose Tsukiyomi chapter 3 . 4/19/2014 Ooooh. I love these short tantalising chapters! Leading to far more interesting prospects for the future! Awesome! |
Dooman1000 chapter 4 . 7/21/2013 ok I don't have a gf but I know that's not how it works for a fact |
Dooman1000 chapter 3 . 7/21/2013 so what a grunt shot her? |
Dooman1000 chapter 2 . 7/21/2013 not bad but if I was in her postion I think id be shitting bricks |
MECHANICALCHEESE chapter 5 . 5/25/2013 I've read better stories. Maybe you should get your story read by a Beta reader before publishing something from now on... Well, I'm not sure if you've improved your writing skills or not, so what the heck, you did an 'alright' job. I just think you did a poor job transitioning from "filthy human scum" to "my dear baby doll." I mean, WTF?! People are usually NEVER capable of forgiving so easily, let alone become attracted all of a sudden. Ah well, I guess I've been reading too well-crafted stories in order to fully appreciate the novice ones as well. Anyways, go find yourself a Beta Reader, and put a little better transitioning of thoughts, perspectives, and plot summarizing into your stories. I'm sure your stories will be better-received when you decide to do so. Good day. |
Zevashi-Roach Drake chapter 6 . 4/29/2012 On all fours, but with stomach facing up... ...Hoooooow? |