Reviews for The Inheritance
Charlee56 chapter 13 . 7/27
Ok. You started this in August and "ended operations" in November...?!
This tale needs an end. No pun intended. You've had going on eight years. Time to finish up!
Charlee56 chapter 11 . 7/27
you made one major mistake in your story and this regarding the aircraft carriers, and that is that British carriers are simply too small and to feel equipped to handle C-130 aircraft. U.s. Navy aircraft carriers are super carriers and their decks are long enough to accommodate takeoffs and landings of C-130 aircraft. For the British aircraft carrier is nowhere big enough and with their slanted take off deck, a C-130 would simply go up and then come right back down into the drink upon takeoff.
Add to this that C-130 aircraft do not have folding Wing configuration and are incapable of being stored in the hangar deck on a British aircraft carrier for an American one for that matter and you see where there is a need for landing them quickly and taking off very quickly.
Even an amphibious assault ship which is an aircraft carrier about the size of an Essex class carrier of World War II configuration would be ill-equipped for these types of operations.
No, you left out the part where the decks were magically expanded to permit for these type operations!
Please keep in mind that in Essex class carriers flight deck is 900 ft long and that is super carriers Flight Deck is about 1200 feet long on the average.
Just an FYI from someone who has been there and seen it.
Guest chapter 10 . 5/8
Griffin and Snake
Or
Pheonix and Lion
Or
All of them because Harry Potter is cool
Guest chapter 13 . 4/20
Please update whenever you can
DaveC chapter 2 . 3/30
I have read this a few times as I like the story but, I hate the line where Harry say’s very well SIR, he should say , you no longer control me so stop with the orders. But it’s your story and I still like it...
Guest chapter 10 . 3/29
Not a flippin actroumaclua! CHIMERA!
Eagle maybe panther or a squirrel
Guest chapter 4 . 3/14
Dog for muggle
Thestral maybe?
Guest chapter 2 . 3/14
Lord Potter-Black
He should also show his founders and Merlin
Guest chapter 10 . 2/15
Don’t do acromantla... please and balisk wouldn’t end well...
no magic: eagle and and panther
Magic: dragon and phoenixe
Guest chapter 9 . 2/15
Have Harry paired with tonks I don’t like SS/HP fanfics... they CREEPY
Guest chapter 7 . 2/15
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Guest chapter 2 . 2/15
He should be called
Lord Harry James...
Potter ( for blood lines
Black ( for Sirius’s sake
Griyfindor ( for obvious reason
Merlin ( another obvious reason
AnimeLime chapter 2 . 2/4
maybe not use 'very well' as often? You can do different things like 'thank you' or 'ok' try not to be quite as stiff...
Virgilsanderlover62 chapter 10 . 1/20
Mythical consideration but not my vote: unipeg otherwise known as alicorn.

My votes: basilisk, dragon. Wolf eagle
DaveC chapter 9 . 1/3
Bit of overkill on the size of his castle...
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