OH MY GOODNESS! THEY'RE SO CUTE! *gives you a plate of cookies and a glass of milk* AMAZING JOB! :D

This was really nice! And if you take into account Light warming up to everybody, and how Fang's Grand Pulse heritage giving her a healthy respect for Eidolons and caution for the wildlife, they weren't too OOC. Not at all!

Aw, the ending sentence seemed almost bittersweet. I was smiling when I read Snow and Hope's interactions. They're relationship is probably one of the best things about the game.

XD I loved it! It was the perfect view on what I think is one of the best partnerships in the game. I love the Lightning/Hope/Snow team. And I trained the pants off of Hope so now he totally kicks ass along with Snow and Light! They made him so weak in the game it pisses me off! _ Ggrr oh well, write more won't you?

Awwww, poor Lightning, working so hard to be the tough girl wiht no emotions, and yet her every act betray the fact that she does feel, and feels very deeply. A lovely piece, and I loved the way you described the various characters thoughts and feelings. Very well done.

That was increadibly adorable! I love them together! Wonderful story!

Fang and Light might have been a bit OOC, but I didn't care. This was just the fic I was looking for when I came on today, and I adored it.

As I read, I kept going "This can't get better!" and it always did. :D Good job!

Good story .

well, i didn't really find any OOCness in this story, but i did find a swapped personality between Light and Fang. I really enjoy this story though, and it's hard to find this kind of story, as the majority of the stories these days are romance.

Mobius, 118 TFS