Loved it! The tone was perfect - just so Eames! ;)

Adorable fluff FTW \o/

The part about Eames' mother was particularly precious :)

Oh! That was sooooooo sweet! You did such an amazing job! I love this story! :D Great job! :D

Heeeey, you can't do that! Mean Arthur! This was great though, hope to see a sequel!

aww the back story was cute but sad. btw i read this first but I'm just now reviewing sorry XD

yay for arthur :p

Oh ! This is one of the cutest thing I've ever read. I think Eames could have had this type of childhood. Great job.

LOVED it :)

If I may, I'm going to start off by saying I enjoyed this- for the most part.

A few grammatical and spelling errors here and there. But that's not a big deal. Personally, the line dividers you added between every section make it look a bit cluttered. It would be a lot more aesthetically pleasing if you had some other way to separate things.

Also, the ages- They don't make much sense to me. Most people today don't start having sex when they are twelve and experimenting when they are thirteen, let alone twenty years ago. And its pretty unrealistic that Eames would be getting into the dreaming businesses at twenty. That would make Arthur something like fifteen.

I like your style and I think you did a great job with like 90% of it. I see a LOT of potential here, And I hope I wasn't out of line by offering my opinions.

Always,

Midnight Justice

Cute! :D

"...harmless (okay, that was a lie), sexy (Eames had no modesty, never will), kind (another lie. . . . .)"

Heh heh. Too true _

Wow, the parts with Eames' mother were gorgeous and heartfelt and So. Sad.

The rest was fun and deceptively playful for being actually quite meaningful as well.

Good stuff ]

interesting, very interesting.. ] nice job Mikasaur!

aaaawww! sooo cute!

the end was so unexpected though xD still loved it

you should make moar :D

Very, very nice ) gave me the warm fuzzies. Sequel perhaps? *hopeful eyebrow waggle*