Hey first of all thank you for writing this it's wonderful because it's rather hard to find a good Kaomi fic. Second of all you did an amazing job it's difficult to get these two characters to fall into each other in a way that feels natural and you nailed it and third I loved it and I wish you could do more of this... to sum it up perfect!

Freakin brilliant idea! Kinda out of character for Naomi though, think she only has eyes for one Fitch, but still liked it :D

Would love to read Emily's reaction!

You should definitely think about continuing this, I want to know what would happen next.

is this really just a one shot? It has so much potential to be an amazing story :)