Reviews for Something Real |
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![]() ![]() ![]() how sweet! Wat is that beautiful song |
![]() ![]() ![]() great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg drama! But we know Eli won't pull a KC! He likes her even more now that she opened up, lol at least that's what he said! But still.. I can't wait to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omgawd this story and chapter is amazing! I can't believe you don't have more reviews! Please update chapter 9 soon:)))))))) |
![]() ![]() ![]() eliiiiiiiiiii. DONT MAKE ME COME GET YOU. AND SLAP SOME SENSE INTO THAT PRETTY HEAD OF URES. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :DDDDDD "I melted into a puddle of self-pity, and yet, I almost fooled myself into thinking that those were tears in his eyes." That last line...wow. I just wanna crawl up into a ball and cry. lol This chapter was sooo good! You convey the emotions in both characters so well! And i'm glad being quoted makes you feel famous. That's really what I do in all my reviews - pick out my favorite line in each chapter. Btw, I don't know if i've already said this, but I love your pen name. It makes me giggle! lol Happy writing, and thanks for sharing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwwwwwwgreat chapter yup hot here heat warning issues here for this week update soooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn!11 |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol.. How does my username remind you of Finding Nemo? I would like to know lol.. My username is actually from Spongebob D I loved it. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha its my first initial and Lack is my last name aw i loved it...yet again i am dying...lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and great chapter... lol.. I loved it. Update soon D |
![]() ![]() awww.I luv the make more stories of eli and I be your friend? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soo that's what Clare was doing to herself... :( The moments with Eli were cute, and I love how you trickd us into thinking that Clare and Eli were doing you know what when they were really shopping for shoes. Haha. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG WHAT THE HELL CLARE? Nooo. ( |
![]() ![]() ![]() omfg u are killing me i cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwwwwwww great chapter really ur mom considering letting u move to t.o awesome but got to warn u it unbearable when it humid stupid humidity cant wait to read more so update asap |