Reviews for A Rainy Day
The Gone Angel chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
This is...sad, but well written. Good job. :)

Cheers,
Gone
NatsuDragneel46 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
... (speechless) awesome...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
*sniff* This is so sad! But really well written!
leanne chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
I can't even explain how this made me cry so much! :'((((((((((((((((((
Nithusa chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
that is so sad
Goldenheart11 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
This is a truly heartbreaking story. It just goes to show how different Isabel is from Ian. Maybe Isabel could live knowing she killed. Knowing she is hated but Ian couldn't. He really loved Amy and felt such a deep remorse he ended his life. I love how uncliched this was. Amy didn't reach Ian in time to save him. I liked the ending a bit fluffy but not too fluffy. Just a tad of romance with a lot of angst.

Love,

Goldie
Arabella carrick chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I hate you! You made me almost cry. It was so sweet and cute and sad. I liked it a lot and I really don't hate you. It was awesome XD! Toodles! (/_).
The Girl of the Moon chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
You goy me crying. Happy now?

question: are you the author who wrote The 39th Clue?
thatgirltasha2 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Nice story. Awwww... Why'd Dan had to die? It brought tears to my eyes. It's a sad story, but overall it's still good. Awww... Ian died? Why? But still very good. Awesome!
MargaeryStarks chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I really cried a little. Wow. Great story. You'd better win that contest.
SmurfsTasteGoodOnToast chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
You have to write more! That can't be it! He can't die! But it was really good!
Cascading Rainbows chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Wow. Great job.

Pros:

Description. I nearly cried in this fic, and I *never* cry.

IC-ness. It speaks for itself.

Beginning. It's simple, yet pulls the reader in.

Spelling/grammar. Perfect.

Cons:

You say "sob" way too much in the first portion of the story. Change some words to "sob" or "weep."

Great job, once more. For winning the Madrigals Awards, this story has been added to my community.*

~Joyce
Crying chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Trying not to cry
SugarQueen8490 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
! In case you couldn't tell I'm crying. You better have won that contest! Anyway, from a professional standpoint, that was very well written. Better than most people I see on here. Very depressing, but, hey I really have no room to talk. I'm known to my friends as morbid, depressing, a downer. Call it whatever you like. They still love me though, just like I LOVED this fic. Happy Saturday! _
TaylorSwiftTwilightFan75 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Awww! That's so sad!
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