That was so cute. b(_)d

That was a good ending. I kind of didn't exactly expect it to end like that, but it works. Ifthere is a sequel up I will read it, otherwise I will wait for it ...

Alex dark-serpent

I got caught up in the story again. Sorry. I am really into this ...

Anyway ... I thought I would tell you that ommitting lemon scenes is not completely necessary. While there are boundaries they are not as bad as some people might think. If you were to read any of my fics or some of the ones I have favourited that will tell you. They haven't been taken down yet and if not then I think you can get away with quite a lot.

Alex Dark-serpent

P.S.: keep up the good work.

I got so caught up in the story that i forgot to review. Sorry about that ...

I am not finding anything particularly confusing at the moment. I think stuff is happening and most of my questions [although there are few at the moment] will be answered in time.

Alex Dark-serpent

I think I will have to read the Anita books now. I can at least try and read a few of them. How many are there again? Over 18 I think ...

This is pretty good. I would check over the punctuation a bit, but otherwise it seems fine. The quotation marks flowed a bit weirdly. It took me a few times of reading some of them to understand what was said. I just thought i would let you know ...

Good Job,

Alex Dark-serpent

i like ur story a great deal it's inventive i've also read both Guilty pleasures as well as Acherontia Atropos, i'm not sure if u'r know or not but there is a banned on any storys crossover or not on L. K Hamilton books just thought i'd give ya a heads up so no one takes your story off i like it to much.

0_0 Wow! What a fic. Uhmm take no offense to this but your an Anime freak aren't yah? Yes? I am too. I am addicted to anime lol. Most of the anime I have found has been just that. I stumble upon it and get addicted. When you mentioned Fireballs Slayers actually popped into my mind lol. Did you know that in the series Quatre is empathic? They call it his uhcuu no kokoro(sp?) or Heart of Space. It's often mention for fics that are set during the war. Usually HeeroDuo get together fics lol. Especially around the time Heero "attempts" Blowing up his Gundam AND himself lol Notice I say attempt becasue he only suceeded in blowing the gundam up lol. Wonderful fic though I would have liked to see the lemon scene with Duo and Heero on the table :) ;) Oh and for an equal [artnership it would be either a 2x1x2/1x2x1 or 12/21 (they are both equally dominating and submissive)either or those works just for future refernces lol. Though How you have it works too lol. But it is a lot to type lol. I did notice a lot of Anime references which was interesting and I liked Wufei's being descended from a Dragon. The fight scenes kinda reminded me of a few Vampire games I've played too which was nice and a good change. Oh Do You like Vampire games? Ever Played Vampires of the Masquerade: Bloodlines ? There's expasnions too. The Companion Mod, which is great, and a few other modules(mods) that add on to it as well. I am playing it now. Wonderful game lol. Ohhh Chinese huh? I must say I am a bit of a Myth buff. I love Chinese and Japanese Mytholgy, legends, and History. I only one sort of Myth/Legend/Belief dealing with dragons...or actually those born in the year of teh dragon. I have heard it's an occasion to celebrate when a child is born in the year of the dragon and that supposedly that child will be prosperous and bring great change. Or something along those lines. Gotta wonder when I'm going to do that? I was bron in the year of thr dragon. Not doing too well though in any way. My life sucks lol. I may not be of any descernible heritage(Heinz 57 here lol) but I do know of some of my Ancestry being from the Asian descent(Japanese or Chinese maybe both but not quite sure) and Native American and of course gotta throw in the Egyptian and Greek(Roman)(Which errr nationality was ALexander the Great? I'm descended from him on my mom's side very very very far back(I think through my granfather's side lol) Isn't Ancestry very confusing? Ah well. I have jabbered enough I think. I loved the fic. Very good though makes me nervous about this hint you gave for the sequel lol. Well Off to do more reading.

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