yay for Roxy, Metaphorical Hugs, ~Gexie of the DisOrganization~ _

:D. Just...:D.

Seriously? I think it was perfect and awesome. Oh and HOT.

I loved their characterization - and the fact you described tgem just like Lady Karai 3 And making it in Roxas' POV made it even better for me - because I'm a helpless fan of his 3

It was funny, it made me giggle few times while reading. But mostly I had to just bite on my lower lip, I was so enchanted by the story.

Axel wasn't the only one intoxicated 3

Really, much love for this. great job!

Love NCIS, Come Home (JUST finished reading it before this XD) and LOVE this 3

Oh, wow, I loved it! I just started reading the entries, but if they're all like this, I'm going to have an awful time picking a winner.

The situation you chose for your oneshot was a fantastic idea. I loved the sexiness and the beautiful tenseness from those unresolved feelings. Your writing was very descriptive, not at all cliche, and very well organized. I'm not a particular fan of second-person narratives, but I got used to it quickly enough that it didn't detract from the overall experience. I noticed a few problems with verb tense here and there, but that was the only real negative thing I found. Overall a wonderful story, a strong entry, and a definite contender. :)

- Karai

I never see fanfictions in the second person. Usually it would be kinda weird, but in this situation, it's kinda cool to see through Roxas's point of view when he's with Axel. Or at least, how you would perceive it. It's also very hawt :3