I really enjoyed this much of the story that you have uploaded I really hope that you update soon as I am currently wondering how Yao is feeling as he is missing 2 teenage boys to help him with keeping everything well oiled!

Not sure I like how the numbers break up the chapter sections. Interesting progression though. I really wonder what Vash is thinking. And just kick your attackers in the balls, Elizaveta!

I liked this :) I hope to read more _

I wonder what they're gonna do with Matthew.

WOOOOHH!

Wow, this had been a while.

I had actually thought this was a new story. Then I remembered I read this some time ago.

This is a wonderful story! The angst and stuff.. Like wow.

And the section at the end, I'm wondering if that is Alfred? Is there a relation between Al and Matt? Will there be romance? These questions need answers! I'm really curious of the plot!

I do hope you continue on with your stories!

I'm so happy this wasn't discontinued ;w;

Update soon~!

Ahhh. This is so good! Can't wait for more! And Alfred. There needs to be Alfred.

This is so great!

You seriously need to write more!

Update soon~.

*sing-song voice* Meet The Robinsons~ what, I didn't say anything. Nope.

Anyway, hrrngh, I seriously love the cliffhanger of the chapter. The writing style of it, the "they"s and the drip drip drip, gah, I love it. Looking forward to how you reworked the second chap from when I last saw it.

love it so far! excited for the next chapter -

It reminds me of a movie that was once a book...the Theif Lord I believe...but I don't think it's that. Oh well, I really enjoyed it! Too bad it might go M

This is a really good start,I really like it so far. Please keep it up!