Good story

Your pairings are garbage. Which is what your mother told me she wished she dumped you in, after I fucked her hard in the matress. Hey, maybe I'll give her the child she wishes she had, to replace you.

Pls updte soon love this story!

This was honestly one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. It was so different then many others. At first I was not sure I would like it but after reading the first two chapters I could not stop. I love how you portrayed Hinatas father. Most people make him hate Naruto but you got it right. Also lije how you made Naruto a little darker but still some how kept the Naruto we all love. Also really liked the tention you had between Naruto and Hinata bit knowing each other. There are just to many things to compliment. Like kikashi having a family and giving the akasuki(sorry the spelling error) more personality, and makeing them the good guys again. I wish it was longer but I know that some of the longer fanfiction lose there appil by adding to much "fluff". Great work and I really enjoyed reading this!

Finish the story please

i like it a lot

Nice

Good story, sad that's all of it.

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on the story.

I love this fic, it's so well written. I was very upset to see that it doesn't end.

Loved this fan fiction, I enjoyed every chapter. I'm sad to see this unfinished. My only issue, its a small one, was that Naruto seemed a bit too perverse (I'm referring to all the chapters in general), but I think its fine, nothing that really bothers me much. I loved each and every NaruHina moment, the family bonds of the Akatsuki, and everyone's reaction to Naruto.

Just wow, the first chapter already pulls you in. It sucks to know this isn't finished.

Everything is HAPPY-HAPPY, until u realize their AT WAR (this juvenile crap over bloodlines is STUPID when someone wants YOU ALL DEAD!)... Might be time to FORGET ALL THAT CRAP!... Whose village is badder? Seems kinda DUMB WHEN YOUR ALL A BIG CEMETERY!

So Kumo, kidnaps one of the KEY PIECES of the war effort, FROM THE STRONGEST village... DURING THE PLANS OF THE WAR... IN order to...WHAT? (NOTICE HOW YOU TOOK A SHARP RIGHT TURN AT LOGICAL)... DIE FIRST?.. Maybe die in an explosion?... (THAT WOULD BE COOL)... die by burning?... Doing this SHIT while at war?.. MEANS YOUR GONNA DIE somehow... I just wonder why a kage would so easily but his village to death.

YUM YUM, chewing the HELL outta that "ANGST BURGER"...WHINE ASS... Would you like a little CHEESE for that WHINE?... SO what.. you did bad things? SO DOES EVERY SOLIDER... You do things you regret? IT"S CALLED "LIFE"... Get with the program, PUSSY!