wow.. this is maddeningly awesome.. XDD

...um...as a literature critic i'd say really well written and good use of grammar skills, but as a Gaahina fan...*sob* ur a big meanie... -

I loved it.

Wow. This was incredible. Very well done, very in-character, and perfectly angsty. Lovely addition to an amazing ship. Thanks for sharing!

Oh my! There is no adjective for how great this story is! Only one review? Craziness I tell you! I think you captured these two so well, even if it is a crack pairing I seriously love these guys. Keep it up!

wow! That was great! Though I was really hoping for a happy ending, I liked it! :)