Why Arthur is always a bottom, a uke and the woman in fruk fictions? He's so ooc and boring when it's the case, such a disappoitment. I wish we could see a MANLY England for once

I loved this story. 10/10

Excerpt:

"Do you love me?" Francis asked suddenly; Arthur was shocked, almost – angry, even.

"O-of course I do!" He shouted, furrowing his eyebrows and pouting, to which Francis answered, "Then prove it to me. Shout it to the world." He gestured towards the mesh.

"Fine!" He blushed, leaned over to Francis' ear and whispered quietly, "I love you, jerk."

"Hmm? Why did you whisper it to me?"

"Because…" Arthur looked away, suddenly stricken with shyness; he whispered even more gently, "You are my world."

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Yes, I'm a sucker for happy (and cheesy) endings. Really. I love the last line ('You're only one half of my Romeo') as reference to the title, and when I finished reading this chapter, I was squealing the whole time.

I admit, I can't believe the story is already ending; Matthew and Alfred's hilarious antics, the drama (if you could call it that) with Jeanne, and Francis and Arthur's wedding; everything was perfect. Thank you for writing this.

That was a good story! I enjoyed it!

It was creative and the Romeo and Juliet parallels made me smile. Of course the characters still had their own personality. I loved reading Alfred and Matthew's comedy relief. Some good moments there!

I hope it's okay to point out though, that there were a few small things I got confused about. Small details like the location of Arthur/Francis' home to Matthew/Alfred's home. I thought the latter was above Arthur's until later. There were a few other things but I'm afraid I can't remember at the moment. (o7o;;)

Another thing I'd like to comment on is, while the story was great, a bit more description would help the reader really see the story; if you know what I mean. It did drag a tiny bit after they finally began the steps of engagement, but that's okay for me because I kind of like reading the little steps.

That said though, it was still a great read Ah, the dramas of love. I pat you on the back for a job well done and I'll definitely check out the sequel Good job!

Also, I know the contests are over, but for the sake of answering something I hope you don't mind if I throw in my own thought for the easy question. The answers to the medium and hard questions were just as I would think, but I had a bit of a different (and maybe over shot) idea for the easy question.

Easy: What is the name of Arthur's plush? Why do you think he named it so?
Well, the plush's name is Fluffy. After all, a fluffy unicorn plush seems to fit the stereotype we have in our minds. Magical, mythical creature and all! Not to mention it's a plush, which would most likely be made of soft fabrics and not leather. But I would think there may be a deeper meaning to it, just for the moment-at-the-pet-store's sake. My thought is that Arthur owned a rabbit he called Fluffy (Hence the reason he muttered the adjective while looking at the bunnies) and he was very close to this pet. It provided him with comfort when he was younger and now, this unicorn, a present from his lover Francis, has become his new source of special comfort. As such, he decided to name his new friend "Fluffy", for both sentimental reasons and physical. (then again, who knows what goes on in Arthur's head. ;D)

Sorry, didn't mean to send that last review incomplete.
Anyway, "je ne sais pas" is the only think i know in French because of a song.

Hahaha. "Je ne sais

1. How exactly did arthur aford a dorm as you describe under the petty job he had? Even dorms that have the kitchen/libing area across from the beds, with say a small bathroom, are very very pricey.
I refused to read any and everything after the mention of Karaoke. Will you always be writing painful things for me to read through this story?

1. This doesn't make sense. Before Arhtur and Francis's dorm was BELOW Matthew and Alfreds. Now they're beside it? :L
2. There are several parts where I can't understand who's talking because you just have a random string of dialougue and nothing else.

This was painful to read.
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XD "Britannia angel" you're going to make references to everything aren't you?

Arthur laughed, "You know…if we were countries, we'd probably hate each other, and fight a lot."

Francis flashed him a friendly smile and replied, "But Arthur, we are not countries. We are people. We are friends."

-_- really? :D Well...even though they ARE countries, according to Paint It White, "Deep down in their heart of hearts, they love each other...sexually."

The first half of the story was great but when it hit the marriage part it got boring. It was well written but the characters were really OOC. Other than that it was great.

Emgee Kagamine,

Real great story dude! Nice work on spelling, grammar, et cetera. Though I would just like to say, when you are writing, it seems that there is parts missing to it, like it's chopped out. You're writing one thing, the next sentence is about something completely different. Try to make sure it's not choppy.

Also, when you are describing something, really explain it, for example, talk about what their room looks like, what the city looks like when they go out, all those things. I don't have a clear picture on what some places look like.

So that is about it. I hope this advice is useful for later stories, and I didn't want to be mean. This is overall a good story. Just watch out for the stuff above!

~Rock n' Fuckin' Roll

LOVED this! P.U.R.E. W.I.N!

This was a wonderfully sweet story that I'm glad that I read ")

I think the Romeo & Juliet parallels were perfect and it totally enhanced this story. Usually, I find Romeo & Juliet themed stories to be kind of dull and overdone but no at all with your story. The way you used the Shakespeare quotes and story made your story have more depth and it took it in a very organized direction.

:) Thank you for writing this! I certainly adored it~~~