I was in tears by the end of this story, please write more stories.

Holly crap! that was a sad story awesome writing and story though great job!
Please keep writing this stuff!

Is it so wrong that I cried at that one?

At least thell be togather again sniff sniff.

Crying.

on a scale of sadness of 1 to 10 its a 5000

i had a tear come down my cheak!

me encanto

I am amazed by the language used in it. The pain and grief the Pharoah put himself through and when he finally couldn't go on any longer. As a huge fan and lover of Yami, I am wowed by the emotions and words you emitted for him. It couldn't fit his personality and tenacious abilities any better. Additionally, I really liked how you made Bakura's character, cruel in many ways but knows when to stop. Truly, a fanfic one-of-a-kind. I hope you can write more like these!

-hissing noise- Holy cow! EPIC STORY! That was...AMAZING! Poor Yami...MuAHAHAHAHAHA! I love how you had him smash the puzzle! -evil grin- Ra Damn tombrobber. -snicker snicker-

Ahh so so so sad. ;_; But we were forewarned. As always, beautifully written. I like how you Had Yami sort of go through the 5 stages of loss very naturally. Denial at first, then there's depression which is usually later but that doesn't matter, bargaining and blaming himself, anger at Bakura, and then acceptance. Really well done :)

One thing to fix: "Only the darkest, most evil individuals would even have the gull."

I think you mean "gall," right? The guts to do something? A gull is a seabird. Hehe :P

Oooohhhh that's so sad! Seriously, when I read your warning that it would probably make me cry I was thinking, "Aw, so it might be a little bit sad, but nothing I'll shed serious tears over". But I got to the end and literally, I'm sitting here now sniffing away as though I'm watching the final episode again. Heartbreaking!

I didn't think Bakura was really OOC. His sympathy-for lack of a better word-seemed to me more like the sarcastic remorse he showed in the anime, pretending to be sad about what he did but not really. I actually think his line "I didn't want to kill her, you know," made him seem a lot more IC than any amount of ridiculous happiness at her death would have.

I also think it's incredibly likely that Yami would instantly blame himself for losing her, and I love the way he shattered the puzzle, as one last giant 'Fuck you' to Bakura. It really seems like something Yami would do.

The last two lines were what did it. I was reading the whole story with a determined look on my face, thinking "I will not cry, I will not cry," and then the last tiny bit of happiness at the end and the floodgates opened. Good lord you know how to get a reaction. I wish I could get this much out of my readers. Seriously, it's definitely a talent that doesn't come easily.

It was a nice change from all the happy, fluffy stories out there. Definitely one I shall mark and come back to when I feel like a good cry.

As always, an amazing story to add to your repertoire.

Cheers,

WCB.

This was really sad.

I felt Yami's pain so much. You made it seem so real, and Bakura's remorse was shown too. Good details and really sad story but the ending was better. At least they'll be together and that what matters.

I was really in need to cry and you made me shade a tear. Really great one-shot.

~Rawan