You may notice that im basically going through all your stories haha... But i like the take on this story. I mean yeah i would love to have seen them give in but you make a valid point. They are both pretty loyal to their home planets and have fought for them pretty hard despite the challenges...to them this want they have is just another challenge. I like how you wrote it's easy to want but it's hard to resist it, or something similar to that. To me this is a more realistic perspective on zadr that no one seems to try and tackle (even though zadr isnt normally 100% realistic)

Great work!
All of dat tension is just fabulous

You should make a second part to this, it would be a good continuation of the struggle to control their feelings for each other. Eventually one of them is going to break _ But it was still very fun to read

THAT WAS SEXY I SAY!

it was great, hyuman
-oops-
I'M NORMAL!

Hotness aside, the lingering darkness of the restraint and the want is what makes this so incredible. There really isn't enough tastefully done ZADR, but this was perfect. I'm going to go read everything you wrote now, probably.

Wow. That was incredibly good. I loved it! 3 They were both so in-character, and you left me just wanting more! AND MORE. AND MORE *.* Lol Dib too. It'd be nice if there could be a little sequel to this :D Very good though. Pretty damn amazing :)

Really good!

Personally, I thought that was amazing.

... :D!

Wow! The characters were surprisingly In Character and this all seemed so probable! I liked it a lot, and if you wanted to I wouldn't mind reading more of it. (Pssh, who am I kiding? I'd be squealing in fangirlish delight if there was more! XD)

All in all, wonderful one shot. I'll have to read more of your works now! :p

*crowd chant* WE WANT MORE WE WANT MORE lol awesome story again with the teasing one shots! y u taunt me soooo? haha

I have a rather delightful sensation in MY squeedlyspooch thanks to this fic.

The sexual tension between those to morons was delicous~ Bravo!

I'm not normally a fan of ZADR, but this was amazingly written! Great work!

So fucking hot! It was perfect the way you describe how they both want to give in but they never allow themselves because they got duties and loyalties to keep! But even though they know they are gonna do it everyday! I love this!

Those two... they're so stubborn. Reading this made my neck hurt... Ouchie.