I love it :)

It's early in the morning and I'm too lazy to log in, so shoot me.

Anyway, I liked the third ending best (The one where Axel had to keep watching) because I'm a sucker for emotional torture and sad endings. (If you haven't noticed, about 80% of my stories are tragedies, but that's just me.) I don't know why I'm using parentheses.

Anyway, I liked it. It was well written and since I just stopped reading Freeze Frame for the day (A great story by Heidi Ayabre - I highly recommend it.) I was in the mood for more tragedies and I have to say that this pretty much satisfied me.

I just realized how ridiculously long this review is and how it isn't really about the story.

So, I'll leave you to it. Keep up the good work and never stop writing. Ever.

~Darke

Dude that was epic! How did you come up with such a great way, but sad to end that story? It was amazing.