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![]() ![]() You are the best! I love stories what doesn't always end up happily. THIS WAS SO HEARTBREAKING! I JUST HOLD MY BREATH TILL THE END. I shouted in my mind! I just can't believed they, hers team didn't see that. You just let us the readers see that he was that bad man. I am read about 4 your fics and all of them is so brilliant. I loved that fic where JJ was kidnapped and she just speak spanish and doesn't trust anybody. Thank you wonderful fic Storby in tumblr Damon16 in skype My email: |
![]() ![]() ![]() god damn my effing heart. the second henry died i knew there was no way jj would survive but it still shocked me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Good God! My heart broke for JJ. I kept screaming at the screen trying to tell the team who the UNSUB was...lol. My heart now breaks for the team as they deal with their guilt. Great story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story was simply amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, in the end I just stayed like ...wow... but great story (most of your stories are that way;) But one thing...I'm not judging or anything I just need to believe that the team wouldn't be ignoring JJ's try on identifying the UnSub, however delirious she might be |
![]() ![]() ![]() My chest hurts, there's a giant lump on my throat and my eyes are burning..You've written this story so beautifully and strongly and i totally applaud you. i was hoping JJ would live (and secretly wishing she would end up with Hotch), but i loved the ending just the same and i totally understand your reasons for killing her. I am looking forward to your next stories and also hoping you'd continue your other story, This is the Place, and update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did what I didn't have the courage to do in Art of Butterflies - you killed off JJ. I respect you for it, i admire you for it, even if I'm about to cry in a dorm room. Which, really, isn't the best of ideas because then you invariably have to explain yourself. This story was amazingly written. You know this. But I'll tell you it again - your stories are unique in ways that are astounding. There's also this - I think you kept both parts of the prompt. Even if you didn't start in the POV of a guardian angel - the team is kind of like JJ's guardian angel, aren't they? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate that JJ was killed, but you're right, it was kinder that way. Can't wait for more from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so, in all true honesty, this story was amazing. Despite the fact JJ died, I believe that was the kinder thing to do. The aftermath after an experience like that would be brutal. Especially since she is left with nothing. She'd be pretty much broken to the point that she'd feel dead. I understand your reason of choice for this. I myself think you did a wonderful job at everything. Portraying the characters was a big one for me. I saw you did so well. This review may be long but I am trying to sum up that I loved this. So basic fact to this is, I loved it. I can't wait for your next story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's slowly dying! You have to let the team find her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gosh, your amazing at pin pointing every detail that the team would do. My my, another wonderful chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have got tingles reading this. |
![]() ![]() GASP! You killed her! Omfg! That is so sad! I was almost crying, but I couldn't because I just did my make-up and I didn't want to go to school with mascara tracks and red eyes from crying x) This story was just brilliant, and you wrote it so well. I could actually see this happening in an episode.. Well, maybe not with JJ, but with another victim :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this story dont get me wrong i love JJ shes my fav but it was a such a good ending :) Cant wait for your next story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is fantastic. And as sad as it is that JJ died I think you made the best choice- it was much more realistic this way. You're awesome. Can't wait for your next story! |